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11/24 - Page 55!

Kadew

sometimes life really is quite lovely
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Team Delta
Pokédex No.
38
Caught
Jun 10, 2019
Messages
1,698
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A Dry Place
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Careful
Pronouns
Pokémon Type
  1. Grass
  2. Normal
Pokédex Entry
If you encounter a wild Kadew, best practice is to gently bully her into remembering that she loves to draw. She forgets, sometimes.
bless bianca she's trying so hard to help and be a good friend to finley through this rough patch
 

ashdrawsarts

Conqueror of the Vermillion Gym
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
452
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Jul 9, 2019
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29
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Quiet
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They/them, he/him
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  1. Ghost
  2. ???
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Finley Has a Fun Conversation
Page 55!

@Tailsimp Fun fact: That opening scene was originally very different and had a lot of dialogue, but I ended up changing it while sketching because I didn't like it that much. Good to see my instincts were right on that one :D
Bianca is trying. So Hard!! She's doing her best to keep this journey fun even if the universe is actively fighting against her on that.
Psssh what, nothing to worry about here. Finley and N have had such nice conversations before now, no way anything will go wrong
Also, thank you!! Your support really means a lot to me and I'm glad you like this comic so much <3

@Kadew Bianca literally deserves a medal after all this. She's doing so much and the world is Not making it easy on her
 

Tailsimp

A Universally Under-Rested University Imp
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50
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Jun 15, 2019
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1,227
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A Literal Desert
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Quiet
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  1. Electric
  2. Psychic
Pokédex Entry
Tailsimp: The Impish Pokemon. Despite being quiet and reserved, this pokemon is usually very happy to talk and is always excited to help out!
God the universe really is against Bianca making Fin happy huh!?

Man this hurt even more than I thought it would. I have to give it to Fin though, taking away all of N's power in that conversation by admiting fault was a power move even if not intended that way. Tho it still hurts to hear Fin state it that way. Its not completely wrong, but there's so much more to it then simply being on this journey. The Pokemon themselves made choices that contributed to it aa much as Fin's action or even Fin bringing them along in the first place. But of course theres no way to explain that. :')

The sequence where Fin is yelling at N and Jade's subsequent defense are all really fantastically done! The art really pushes those desperate and painful feelings in the scene. Absolutely wonderful job.

In related news watch where u step, my heart is in pieces on the floor :')
 

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