Comic Unova General Mon Road Map Not Included: A White Nuzlocke

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Summary:
Finley’s idea is simple: get a pokemon, go on an adventure, hang out with friends, beat some gyms, see some cool cities, and defeat the most powerful trainer in the region! Unfortunately, life isn’t exactly known for going according to plan

Rules:

Spoiler

1. Can only catch the first pokemon on each route
2. If a pokemon faints it is considered dead
3. Must nickname all pokemon
4. No duplicates
5. Can only use one item per pokemon in battle
6. No legendaries
7. Inner and outer Pinwheel Forest count as two separate areas

So hey! I decided to make a nuzlocke comic! There are a lot of reasons for that, but one of them is just that these types of comics really inspired me when I was younger. I'm not sure if I would be as into webcomics as i am now if it weren't for nuzlockes, and I felt like it was time I contributed! The story is based off of a run of White I did over the summer and it was just so much fun to go through and I hope to do it justice. This is going to be a bit experimental, but I hope you enjoy!


Updates every other Wednesday!

Table of Contents:

Spoiler

Spoiler: Part 1

Cover
Prologue
Page 1
Page 2
Page 3
Page 4
Page 5
Page 6
Page 7
Page 8
Page 9
Sketches
Gijinkas

Spoiler: Part 2

Page 10
Page 11
Page 12
Page 13
Page 14
Page 15
Page 16
Page 17
Page 18
Page 19
Page 20
Page 21
Page 22
Page 23
Pokemon Transportation
Beach Episode
First Anniversary

Spoiler: Part 3

Page 24
Page 25
Page 26
Page 27
Page 28
Page 29
Page 30
Page 31
Page 32
Page 33
Page 34

Spoiler: Part 4

Page 35
Page 36
Page 37
Page 38
Page 39
Page 40
Page 41
Page 42
Page 43
Page 44
Page 45
Page 46
Page 47
Second Anniversary
Page 48
Page 49
Page 50
Page 51
Page 52
Page 53
Page 54
Page 55

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[sugar heart]

aaaaah!?

YOUR ART IS SO???? PRECIOUS?!?!?

ONLY PROLOGUE AND I????? ALREADY LOVE THIS RUN

BEST OF LUCK WITH THIS RUN

 

[Purpl]

This looks like a really fun comic! Your art style looks great and I can’t wait to see more of this!

 

[ashdrawsarts]

@sugar heart Aaaaaaah!!! Thank you so much!!! I'm glad you like it!

@DerpPurpl Thank you! I'm looking forward to making more!!

 

[Kadew]

I'm already sold on this sweet supportive family, please only let good things happen to them. I'll be watching.

 

[ashdrawsarts]

@Kadew :D good to hear! I wanted their dynamic to be something nice and that made it super fun to write! And of course, only good things here :3

 

[ashdrawsarts]

Update!

Page 1

 

[Kadew]

Sinvy! I love Clover already, and definitely not because I'm a sucker for both snakes and grass types. I'm already enjoying the friendly dynamic of our main trio, and Juniper's little bit about annoyed league officials in her lab is great, just a bunch of small charming interactions that all add up to a pleasant page to read!

 

[Uberle]

This is just so pure I love it

Clover looks so uninterested in what's going on
I love him already

 

[ashdrawsarts]

@Kadew Clover is a joy to draw because he is just a bendy noodle and it gives me an excuse to look up pictures of pet snakes,,, And thank you! I'm glad you enjoy the character interactions, they're one of the things I spend the most time on when scripting!

@Uberle ^-^ thanks! And yeah, Clover isn't exactly thrilled to be here

 

[sugar heart]

clover looks,,, so pure and adorable; i already lOve him;;;

also i wonder what juniper did to get annoyed league officials in her lab...

 

[ashdrawsarts]

@sugar heart Clover is getting all this love already omg,,, I'm glad people like him!

Also hmmm... what could have caused that...

The world may never know

 

[ashdrawsarts]

Time to meet the first teammate!

Page 2

 

[Kadew]

Nice call on cutting the baby rival battles, speeding things along from tutorial town is always good in my books. And we already got a snippit of the starters' character without the battle, that oshawott in particular stood out, the tiny baby edgelord. "Your reckoning will come another day" indeed haha. I also like how everyone with eyes can see that Bianca's plan is terrible and bound to blow up in her face the second her father inevitably finds out. I wish them the best of luck in pinning her down to talk about it later.

 

[Squiggy Azalea]

this looks like a really cute nuzcomic! i like the artstyle, and i also like the neat interactions between the characters as well :D

gonna try and follow this one for sure: good luck on the run as well! really curious to see the rest of this comic!

 

[ashdrawsarts]

@Kadew Honestly Oshawott's lines were changed super last minute because I just enjoyed the new ones so much better and they made everything so much more enjoyable! And yeah, I set a goal to spend as few pages in Nuvema as possible just to get out of tutorial land faster. Bianca's plan is... certainly something and the other two are definitely still Concerned, but we'll just have to see how well they do at getting her to actually consider the consequences

@Squiggy Azalea Awww thank you! :D I hope you like how it continues!

 

[mykehroo]

This. This stuff right here. It fuels me.

also the interaction between Clover and Oshawott lmao

Keep up the good work!

 

[ashdrawsarts]

Time for Route 1!

Page 3

@mykehroo Thank you! I'm glad I could provide the fuel ^^

 

[LemonTea]

This run is adorable!
Honestly I'm loving Finn's supportive family. Like, family drama is a staple of Nuzlocke storytelling but it's sooooo refreshing when the main character just has an uncomplicated, loving and caring relationship with their parents.

Hahaha, Bianca's terrible ideas are super relatable.

I'm already looking forward to the next page!

 

[ashdrawsarts]

Update!

Page 4

@LemonTea Aw, thanks! I totally agree with you on the family relationship stuff. While there's a lot of interesting things you can do with a bunch of drama in the family, I feel like there's also a bunch of interesting things that can be done when the main character has an actually good relationship with their parents. Plus it's just fun to write!