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Comic Fan Original PMD - Little Lapses

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An original story based in the PMD world~

Zero

Jet's Black Nuzlocke
Artist
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Pokédex No.
51
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426
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Nature
Lax
Pronouns
she/her/it
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  1. Fire
  2. Bug
Pokédex Entry
It is born asleep, and it dies asleep. All its movements are apparently no more than the results of it tossing and turning in its dreams.
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"Little Lapses"
An original story taking place in the PMD universe
by SaltnPepperBunny and ZeroProStudio

+---Little Lapses will update every Monday!---+

Deviant Art | Comic Fury | Webtoons | Tumblr


The essence of true friendship is to make allowance for another’s little lapses.
-David Storey​

School is out, and summer’s here! Holly the Yungoos is the newest kid in Amity Village, and her first year at her new school is finally wrapping up. With her friends Cinnabar the Scorbunny and Blue the Phanpy at her side, nothing can ruin the last day of school… except for one problem: Something is bothering Blue, and she won’t share what it is. To make her feel better, Cinnabar has declared that their first day of summer is going to be the best day ever! But good intentions pave the road to big trouble. Holly, Cinnabar, and Blue may be in for more than they can handle, and in order to stick together, they’ll have to make allowance for each other’s little lapses.
~The Creators~

This is a collaboration between Pepper and I! We both came up with the story and characters together, with Pepper taking care of the dialogue, and then we both work on the art, with Pepper doing the sketches and me taking care of the rendering!​
 
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Zero

Zero

Jet's Black Nuzlocke
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Pokédex No.
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Lax
Pronouns
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Pokémon Type
  1. Fire
  2. Bug
Pokédex Entry
It is born asleep, and it dies asleep. All its movements are apparently no more than the results of it tossing and turning in its dreams.
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OwO page one!

I love stories within a story~ and a great way to title drop too!

Sketch Composition by the Salt n Pepper Bunny
Rendering by ZeroPro Studio
 

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"Am I Mario's babysitter? Are you going to call me every time that guy blows his nose, or what?"
It's here! 😍 My first thought when I saw Leavanny was "Bug Fables reference? 👀 " play bug fables friends
 
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Pokédex No.
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It is born asleep, and it dies asleep. All its movements are apparently no more than the results of it tossing and turning in its dreams.
Little Lapses - Chapter 1, Pg 2
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Oh Holly my child~ You’re gonna soak your bedding XD
Why is it hay always looks so comfy in cartoons?

It's here! 😍 My first thought when I saw Leavanny was "Bug Fables reference? 👀 " play bug fables friends
Oooh Bug Fables looks so cute!!!! While the Lycanroc and Floatzel were cameos of different pokemon we had considered using as our main characters, the Leavanny was just a random Pepper choice. I always love how she picks the unconventional mons~

Sketch Composition by SaltnPepper Bunny
Rendering by ZeroPro Studio
 

Bowser's Family Vacation

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"Am I Mario's babysitter? Are you going to call me every time that guy blows his nose, or what?"
hay is made soft through the tears of soft suckers for the found family trope
 
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It is born asleep, and it dies asleep. All its movements are apparently no more than the results of it tossing and turning in its dreams.
Little Lapses - Chapter 1, Pg 3


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I've never done lineless backgrounds for a whole project before so this is gonna be a fun new challenge~ The text on the book was easily done by typing it out with a handwritten font and then mesh warped to fit the shape of the book~ Also I hope you appreciate how the book only has one page on the end there, since she just finished the book. I hate when a character is like, I just finished a book! But the book is just turned to the middle all the time XD

hay is made soft through the tears of soft suckers for the found family trope
omg youre right XD I guess Holly has good taste in media tropes because found family good!


Sketch Composition by SaltnPepper Bunny
Rendering by ZeroPro Studio
 
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"Am I Mario's babysitter? Are you going to call me every time that guy blows his nose, or what?"
That's a good question, Holly. Unfortunately, sometimes the real world is too real! 😭
 

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can "british" be added to the pokemon type thing
Good job on the lineless background, they look super good! And the light filtering into the room from the window is so pretty omg
 
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It is born asleep, and it dies asleep. All its movements are apparently no more than the results of it tossing and turning in its dreams.
Little Lapses Chapter 1, pg 4

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Just for our peace of mind I like to think Holly, uh, went to sleep between the Chapter cover and page one, and just woke up early to finish reading her book! Sleeping is important!

That's a good question, Holly. Unfortunately, sometimes the real world is too real! 😭
TwT indeed, but it does give us something to strive for~ to hope for!

Good job on the lineless background, they look super good! And the light filtering into the room from the window is so pretty omg
Thank you so much Ash! Im really happy with how the light turned out too!


Sketch Composition by SaltnPepper Bunny
Rendering by ZeroPro Studio
 
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So glad I live in a world with phone alarms, or else this would be me everyday. ._.
 
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It is born asleep, and it dies asleep. All its movements are apparently no more than the results of it tossing and turning in its dreams.
Little Lapses - Chapter 1, Pg 5

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Moms! It's fun playing with colors when all three characters are basically the same color palette. Both moms share a color with Holly, but stay at home mom gets to be a bit more pink in her brown~

And I cant believe Pepper made me draw a smooch >:T

So glad I live in a world with phone alarms, or else this would be me everyday. ._.
OKAY BUT LIKE, SAME?!
Tho I think if it was that bright when I finish my book I would know not to go back to sleep XDD

Sketch Composition by SaltnPepper Bunny
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Harold, they're lesbians.
 
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It is born asleep, and it dies asleep. All its movements are apparently no more than the results of it tossing and turning in its dreams.
Little Lapses - Chapter 1, Pg 6

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Holly, sweety, please dont rub butter directly onto your toast like a barbarian!

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Harold, they're lesbians.
XD i actually had never seen where that phrase came from!

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"Am I Mario's babysitter? Are you going to call me every time that guy blows his nose, or what?"
"Teacher, I swear, my mom made me late!"
 
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It is born asleep, and it dies asleep. All its movements are apparently no more than the results of it tossing and turning in its dreams.

Bowser's Family Vacation

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"Am I Mario's babysitter? Are you going to call me every time that guy blows his nose, or what?"
*sighs* That's why I stopped taking math in college. No new math.
 
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Zero

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Pokédex No.
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Messages
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Location
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Nature
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Pronouns
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  2. Bug
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It is born asleep, and it dies asleep. All its movements are apparently no more than the results of it tossing and turning in its dreams.
Little Lapses - Chapter 1, Pg 8
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No Holly! Don't eat your toast! You're supposed to run out the door with it in your mouth!

*sighs* That's why I stopped taking math in college. No new math.
I got all the math I needed tyvm XD
 

Bowser's Family Vacation

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"Am I Mario's babysitter? Are you going to call me every time that guy blows his nose, or what?"
The other protagonists of this comic:
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It is born asleep, and it dies asleep. All its movements are apparently no more than the results of it tossing and turning in its dreams.
Little Lapses - Chapter 1, Pg 9
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Holly's mom knows something we dont u_u listen to your mom Holly, communication is very important amongst friends~

The other protagonists of this comic:
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LKJSAKLFJASLFJKSFH Gee Holly, how come your mom let you have two moms and why are they both beating me up ToT


Sketch Composition by SaltnPepper Bunny
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