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Comic Leftovers: A Hoenn Saga

mizar

young, dumb, and full of you know ;)
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
76
Caught
Jun 16, 2019
Messages
268
Location
lost
Nature
Quiet
Pronouns
they/them
Pokémon Type
Dragon
IT'S BACK!! cute page :O Max has butch vibes i stan
asadi is about to be completely underwhelmed with what a hostel is
 

bumblebee

Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
3139
Caught
Dec 13, 2020
Messages
92
Nature
Timid
Pronouns
She/her/hers
Pokémon Type
Water, Flying
Pokédex Entry
This pokemon flits from new idea to new idea, never able to settle down.
!!!!!! I just adore your character interaction; the mama bear quality of Miss Gidget is just....so good. Every single panel is so fluid, it feels as though there's a certain tempo to each page. I also absolutely agree with Krisantyne!! This entire page gives me busy college/university cafeteria vibes; you can just hear how chaotic this scene is!
 

Pcaara

Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Artist
Pokédex No.
371
Caught
Jul 4, 2019
Messages
89
Pokémon Type
Water, Dark, Dragon, Fighting, Ground, Cool, Cute, Tough, ???
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #63
Ohhh I love how you created this busy and mildly stressful breakfast atmosphere with the chaos over who sits where, I can feel that in my bones!
And the look on Asadi's face when she realizes she's being "adopted", awww! It's nice to belong somewhere. ;v; <3
Aaaaa, THANKS!! I'm glad that, even with some of the corners I had to cut, the business of the atmosphere still came through. Though i'm guessing Asadi's confuddled expression had alot to do with that too XD ALSO DFA;DJF;J I wasn't sure if Asadi's reaction to "being adopted" was enough to be noticed but leave it to you to pick up on the teensy things!!! 😍

IT'S BACK!! cute page :O Max has butch vibes i stan
asadi is about to be completely underwhelmed with what a hostel is
Thank you thank you ;;u;; Also hehehehh tfw Max has butch vibes was part of the design process.

!!!!!! I just adore your character interaction; the mama bear quality of Miss Gidget is just....so good. Every single panel is so fluid, it feels as though there's a certain tempo to each page. I also absolutely agree with Krisantyne!! This entire page gives me busy college/university cafeteria vibes; you can just hear how chaotic this scene is!
MAMA BEAR QUALITYYY. That's EXACTLY it >w< I'm glad you felt the busy vibes too, and it's funny you mention college/university cafeteria specifically because looking back on this page - that's literally what I was channeling looll Mmmm just thinking about the clattering of plates and conversation laden ambience is takin me back.
Thanks for all the sweet compliments on my page layout as well!!

Thanks to all of you guys for commenting, I always appreciate/look foward to your feedback 💖
 

bumblebee

Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
3139
Caught
Dec 13, 2020
Messages
92
Nature
Timid
Pronouns
She/her/hers
Pokémon Type
Water, Flying
Pokédex Entry
This pokemon flits from new idea to new idea, never able to settle down.
Asadi's face when Max makes fun of her ;w; I dunno if I'm reading too much into this, but the fact that Asadi responded in such a way not just to Max laughing at her mistake but also her horror at seeing the two workers arguing, makes me worried about what her history is like.
 

Pcaara

Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Artist
Pokédex No.
371
Caught
Jul 4, 2019
Messages
89
Pokémon Type
Water, Dark, Dragon, Fighting, Ground, Cool, Cute, Tough, ???
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #65
Asadi's face when Max makes fun of her ;w; I dunno if I'm reading too much into this, but the fact that Asadi responded in such a way not just to Max laughing at her mistake but also her horror at seeing the two workers arguing, makes me worried about what her history is like.
Yeeaahh ;;A;; Nobody likes feeling stupid. I mean she even essentially prefaced it with "I don't know what i'm doing so please don't make me feel like an idiot". That said, Max of course means no harm haha
The fact that you're worried about Asadi's history from this series of triggering events is very sweet ;u; Although I can say that the reasoning for her specifically stressing over the two workers arguing is much closer than you think...
 

bumblebee

Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
3139
Caught
Dec 13, 2020
Messages
92
Nature
Timid
Pronouns
She/her/hers
Pokémon Type
Water, Flying
Pokédex Entry
This pokemon flits from new idea to new idea, never able to settle down.
KIBA!!!

When you mentioned that this next one was all about our favorite resident Irritable Gal™ I got very excited. I can totally tell how you kept the same chaoticness of Slateport, while still focusing on the characters themselves (because you've set them up wonderfully in the previous chapters).

I just...love the fact that Kiba asked how Asadi is doing and then as soon as she gets the OK, she's just like, "Awesome. I don't need to do anything like hugging or consoling. Bye, then." Slowly but surely that tough exterior is coming down.
 

Pcaara

Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Artist
Pokédex No.
371
Caught
Jul 4, 2019
Messages
89
Pokémon Type
Water, Dark, Dragon, Fighting, Ground, Cool, Cute, Tough, ???
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #67


It's time for the pokes to shine!
KIBA!!!

When you mentioned that this next one was all about our favorite resident Irritable Gal™ I got very excited. I can totally tell how you kept the same chaoticness of Slateport, while still focusing on the characters themselves (because you've set them up wonderfully in the previous chapters).

I just...love the fact that Kiba asked how Asadi is doing and then as soon as she gets the OK, she's just like, "Awesome. I don't need to do anything like hugging or consoling. Bye, then." Slowly but surely that tough exterior is coming down.

LMAO I love your interpretation that kiba's just like *wipes brow* all in a day's work doing the bare minimum. I mean that is exactly what she did on the surface, but like you said that tough exterior is coming down....

Also AAAAA thank you for the compliment on my character setup! I'm glad their arcs and such are coming across adequately >w<
 

Krisantyne

oh no
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
655
Caught
Aug 10, 2019
Messages
209
Location
A Jar of Olives
Nature
Calm
Pronouns
she
Pokémon Type
Water
Pokédex Entry
This Pokémon clings to Sharpedo and shares in its prosperity. When its Sharpedo is attacked, Krisantyne will fight alongside it!
Afdjhksfl so much stress for Kiba before even getting to eat breakfast, everyone she had to interact with sure hit a bull's eye of what annoys her! Except for Asadi maybe. :3c
Joe being so stressed about what people might think breaks my heart. His son didn't even do anything out of line, he really got hurt and he's so little! I have a feeling that if they were humans, nobody would bat an eye...
 

bumblebee

Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
3139
Caught
Dec 13, 2020
Messages
92
Nature
Timid
Pronouns
She/her/hers
Pokémon Type
Water, Flying
Pokédex Entry
This pokemon flits from new idea to new idea, never able to settle down.
Behold...my magnum opus.



I was ✨inspired✨ after this week's episode 😌

Joe just wanted to help you, Kiba ;w; I adore how your characters are all connected to someone else we see throughout this comic; it never feels as though anyone just floats through space without knowing anyone (Despite the fact that Kiba wants everyone to not acknowledge her existence ever).

I also just love that your entire chat was aghast at a machop not wearing pants?? That's the kind of worldbuilding I love to see! 👏🏻
 

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