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Comic Kanto Teen Mon Forgotten Fables

Thread Description
a runaway trainer tries to find her family

holdinglines

Conqueror of the Vermillion Gym
Artist
Pokédex No.
1279
Caught
Jan 9, 2020
Messages
19
Location
under some blankets
Nature
Quiet
Pronouns
she/them
Pokémon Type
Electric, Fire
https://deviantart.com%2Friverplath%2Fart%2FForgotten-Fables-Cover-796590914
Aesop is on the run, desperately trying to reunite with her mother and escape the country together to live in peace. However, things quickly spiral out of control.

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:hello: RULES :hello:

- Catch the first pokemon in a new area. There will be no second chances if it flees or faints.
- Duplicate Rule
(where if a previously caught pokemon or a Pokemon in it's evolutionary line is the first in an area, then you get three chances for another. After that the above rule applies.)
- Nickname all caught pokemon.
- If a pokemon in the party faints, it is considered dead and will be permanently boxed.
- Whiting out is considered GAME OVER.
- Poke Centers, Marts, and healing items are allowed
- if you see a shiny, catch them.

~~


:flyaway: PAGES :flyaway:

~~
 
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Trollkitten

Kitten of Lore
Artist
Writer
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
208
Caught
Jun 30, 2019
Messages
1,323
Location
Gatto Region
Nature
Quirky
Pronouns
She/her, Aetherai Lorekeeper
Pokémon Type
Fairy, Clever
Pokédex Entry
Autistic writer who starts more things than she finishes. Hyper asexual Twitch Plays Pokemon lorewriter. Rather be a happy shill than an angry critic.
Looks like it's off to a good start, although the first page is kind of blurry. I like your Mr. Mime design.
 

Kadew

*bird sounds*
🌱Featurer
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
38
Caught
Jun 10, 2019
Messages
1,551
Location
A Dry Place
Nature
Careful
Pronouns
Pokémon Type
Grass, Normal
Pokédex Entry
Doesn't actually like birds all that much.
Ooooh new comic new comic! This is off to a promising start, I already like these characters and their interactions. Pantimi has a nice design too, a bit more mellow yet still keeps the terrifying clown vibe that mr mime must have. I agree with trollkitten, though: I went to read your page on deviantart and all the images seemed blurry and pixelated, as though they'd been scaled up from the resolution they were drawn at. Any idea what could've caused that? Your art looks darling though based on the cover and I'd love to see it in its full crisp glory on the pages.
 

holdinglines

Conqueror of the Vermillion Gym
Artist
Pokédex No.
1279
Caught
Jan 9, 2020
Messages
19
Location
under some blankets
Nature
Quiet
Pronouns
she/them
Pokémon Type
Electric, Fire
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #4
Looks like it's off to a good start, although the first page is kind of blurry. I like your Mr. Mime design.
(...) all the images seemed blurry and pixelated, as though they'd been scaled up from the resolution they were drawn at. Any idea what could've caused that?
i did actually scale it up, because it already seemed kind of fuzzy at its original size but then reverted it back. at least i think i did.

i'm sorry for it not looking as good as it could, but i promise not to make the same mistake a second time thank you guys
 

DistortionLocke

Johto League Champion
Writer
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
623
Caught
Aug 3, 2019
Messages
631
Location
U.S.
Nature
Adamant
Pronouns
She/Her
Pokémon Type
Dark, Ghost
Pokédex Entry
Anxious, sweet-toothed writer who hides amongst the papers. Only attacks when provoked.
Great beginning! Love how it gets cloudy in the last panel as Aesop returns home.
 

holdinglines

Conqueror of the Vermillion Gym
Artist
Pokédex No.
1279
Caught
Jan 9, 2020
Messages
19
Location
under some blankets
Nature
Quiet
Pronouns
she/them
Pokémon Type
Electric, Fire
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #6

SnakeEyesDraws

yee to the haw
Artist
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
1350
Caught
Jan 19, 2020
Messages
483
Location
Postwick, Galar
Nature
Careful
Pronouns
she/her
Pokémon Type
Fire, Dragon
Pokédex Entry
Obsessed with cowboy hats
I'm a big sucker for how lively and colorful the art in this comic is! Each panel is bursting to the brim with personality and made the pages a joy to read. I love how much character our protagonist has (riding on a Tauros to catch up with a truck is hilarious and valid) and I love the Pokemon designs, especially the Mr. Mime!
 

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