Oh wow that's a really powerful opening scene- and an even more hard-hitting nightmare. Already love how much Raymond cares about Twyla, and I look forward to
worrying seeing the two as they go on a journey~
Thank you so much, reading this really made my day 🥺 it’s such a pleasure to see that this opening scene carried as much impact as it did—I was honestly scared it would either strike too softly or it would be too much!
And aaaa I love seeing that you’re enjoying the dynamic between Raymond and Twyla! Raymond is truly a soft-hearted bean, and I also am eager to see where they end up (she says, as if she doesn’t already know👀
Oh, yeah, that's one hell of a way to open a run. Seconding the love for the dynamic between Raymond and Twyla we've already gotten to see from the first page alone. And also loving the art style of this run - You've found a great balance of balance of soft, almost sort of cozy coloring, textures, and lineart without sacrificing detail and clarity! Looking forward to seeing where things go from here :0
!! Much love 💖
I really wanted the art to feel very cozy and soft, and I’m excited to hear that’s exactly how it translated for you! It was a struggle to get the colors to work the way it did (especially for Raymond ufhdjkhs brown lineart on a brown pokémon was really NOT the brightest creative decision I ever made gfjhkgsa)
And I look forward to hopefully making you enjoy the run with each update! Thank you so much 💖
omg not me clicking next on dA expecting a second page already lmao
this looks AMAZING, the composition is laid out so nicely that my eyes just naturally go across the screen and the colors are soo soft, it feels like I'm reading a dream. just going to subtlety add this to my watch list
OMG HAHAHAHA :(( that just warms my heart so much! Hopefully, we’ll be getting that second page out soon 💖
it's really been kicking my butt ngl HAHAHA
But omg 💖
This page ended up so far from how it was initially thumbnailed and sketched, but I’m also really proud of how the panels ended up so fjklsdhfl it’s really nice to hear that how this was composed flowed so well for you !
and fhjklsafhlaadf 🥺 🥺
Loving the soft art style! 💖
Also there's an Eevee so I'm instantly sold, haha!
Interesting to see Red make an appearance as well despite this being a run of a Gen V game. I'm definitely looking forward to the next page!
100% EEVEE SUPREMACY! Tbh I’ve always wanted to have a run with an Eevee starter and I just decided: well, what’s stopping me? So here we are HAHAHA
And definitely 👀
can’t help but wonder why Red, of all people, is here hehe
Thank you so much! Here’s to hoping we meet your expectations with the next page 💖
welp. heres another nuzlocke to binge read, cant wait to see more
Hoping to get to the point we have enough pages to actually binge! But aaaa comments like these definitely do light the fire under my butt fdjgskafhdja looking forward to getting these comics out 💖