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Screenshot Fan Game Mature Mon A Dire Mistake [A Pokemon Reborn Dark Monolocke] [MATURE] [Abandoned]

Thread Description
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Saki Nikaido

Zombie Asamiya Saki
Screenshotter
Team Omega
Pokédex No.
363
Caught
Jul 3, 2019
Messages
18
Location
National Park, Johto
Nature
Naughty
Pronouns
She/Her
Pokémon Type
Dark, Ice
1. You can only catch the first dark type that you encounter in an area, route or town, name everything, faint they're dead and go to pc, yadda yadda
1b. If the first encounter is a dupe, you may catch the first non-dupe dark encounter instead. This extends to any members of the evolutionary family. Dupes are optional.
2. There's not that many pure dark types, so dual types count!
3. No legends
4. This is a semi blind run, meaning I only looked at routes to see what dark types are possible to get.
5. There are a ton of gift pokemon and the game has a good wondertrade system, so if there is a route/area with no dark types but I get a gift pokemon, I'll be wondertrading it off until I find a suitable dark type. I may or may not post it, depends on how long it takes to get one. (Gift Token Clause)

00 - Enter the Void
01- A Bleak Beginning

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One way ticket to hell, I suppose.
Cheer up Lucy, It'll be fine.

Senji, I heard the Reborn League is harder than all the other leagues. They've killed Pokemon. Not made them faint. Straight up murder.
Do you forget how good i am?
...Let's just be careful, okay?

...Alright.

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Nice to meet you Ame, I'm Lucy.

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Sure.

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I don't need one, but thank you.
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You okay? You look like you've seen a ghost...

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Oh FU-

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Barely, I feel like a Machamp knotted me into a pretzel. How about you, Senji?

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Senji?

There was no response. As she took the Luxury Ball off of her belt, she noticed the top of the ball was deeply dented, and when she pressed the button there was empty clicks, and no response.

S-Senji...

Ame could only watch as her new acquaintance fell to her knees and let out a choked sob.

Lucy...

After a minute Lucy gently tucked the broken into a safe place in her bag and got up on shaky knees, still woozy from the discovery.

Ame...I-I'll take that starter...

Lucy received the Corrupted Pokéball!

Third time's a charm! I Thank you for reading, and I hope you enjoy this little slice of hell! I've heard that Reborn is quite difficult to nuzlocke, and I wanted to give my own take on it! Now I do have a small question, but it doesn't really warrant a poll! Should I reveal what kind of Pokemon Senji is now or later?
(If you're into gory animes you may pick up on it ;))

I have plans for him, don't you worry~
 

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Saki Nikaido

Zombie Asamiya Saki
Screenshotter
Team Omega
Pokédex No.
363
Caught
Jul 3, 2019
Messages
18
Location
National Park, Johto
Nature
Naughty
Pronouns
She/Her
Pokémon Type
Dark, Ice
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...thank you...

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...could be better.


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Lucy...After doing some digging, I've managed to find this little guy roaming around...I hope he's good for you...

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A-Ame...

I'm sorry about your friend...it was the least I could do...

Thank you, Ame...

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Alright, I guess. Thank you so much, again.

I hear a new voice, are you my new trainer?

Yeah, you can call me Lucy. Nice to meet you, Victor!


Ni-nice to meet you too...

Let's head back downstairs then.

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Sure. You ready Vic?
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That's you, silly!

O-Oh, right! I'll um, do my best!

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Okay, I'll um, scratch it up I guess?

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I did it!

Good job!

What's this, I feel weird...
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I feel stronger!

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I'm proud of you! Let's get you healed up.

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You're doing a great job, Victor!

Th-thanks!

Keep this up and we'll be getting badges in no time!

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sky_

life is a trip alright
Screenshotter
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
181
Caught
Jun 30, 2019
Messages
523
Location
A place to nap
Nature
Gentle
Pronouns
They/Them
Pokémon Type
Ghost, Normal
Pokédex Entry
This ghost tries to be studious and businesslike, but will squee or keysmash easily. They would love to cuddle every adorable cat in the world.
Oh boy, good luck! As someone who's doing a Reborn nuzlocke myself they can be... challenging to put it lightly. The problem though is that atm I can't see any of your images. I don't think the way that you're formatting them works on Xenforo atm. What I'm testing out for uploading screenshots is this:
- there's a piece of software called InfranView which is free to download and can batch resize and convert screenshots to something like PNGs and put them in a specific order
- you can use an image software host (I'm testing imgur) to batch upload them and put them in an album
- paste generated PNG links from the images into the forum

I'll pop some examples in here that I've got using this method:



just a casual Absol, nothing to see here

This may help you with formatting, and if you want some more details just ask. Best of luck with the rest of the run!
 

Saki Nikaido

Zombie Asamiya Saki
Screenshotter
Team Omega
Pokédex No.
363
Caught
Jul 3, 2019
Messages
18
Location
National Park, Johto
Nature
Naughty
Pronouns
She/Her
Pokémon Type
Dark, Ice
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  • #4
Oh man, I had no idea! I messed with the gallery album I made here, maybe thats why? I'll see if that fixes it ;w;

edit: i think i had the view album settings to just me, i allowed it to everyone so it should be working now? My friends offsite say theyre there for them so :/
 
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sky_

life is a trip alright
Screenshotter
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
181
Caught
Jun 30, 2019
Messages
523
Location
A place to nap
Nature
Gentle
Pronouns
They/Them
Pokémon Type
Ghost, Normal
Pokédex Entry
This ghost tries to be studious and businesslike, but will squee or keysmash easily. They would love to cuddle every adorable cat in the world.
Ah yeah I can see them now! Okay so now that I've caught up, I really like the fact that this accomplished Trainer already went with a Pokemon - that makes a lot more sense than coming with none. It sounds like the Luxury Ball which was attached took the hit for her which is sad :( that being said I think it would be a good idea to include much more dialogue in the run to learn more about the character and how she's feeling after all these events, as we kinda skip all of that and just move to her fighting and heading out to the Gym etc.

Also I think you may be missing a few screenshots here and there because, for example, Victoria finishes talking to Lucy and then Cain just pops up to talk to her. A screenshot of Victoria walking away and then Cain coming towards her would be very helpful here. Similarly, area shots like when you go into Lower Peridot Ward or something are v useful for establishing where a character is heading to at any given time. That Sableye is neat though, and good luck!
 

Saki Nikaido

Zombie Asamiya Saki
Screenshotter
Team Omega
Pokédex No.
363
Caught
Jul 3, 2019
Messages
18
Location
National Park, Johto
Nature
Naughty
Pronouns
She/Her
Pokémon Type
Dark, Ice
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #6
That won't happen again! It was a super old run from last year and I missed those shots when I posted them the first time and didn't feel like redoing them when they were already done. I'm trying to find a medium between chatting/feels and story ;w; Seriously guys, there's a butt-ton of story! (lola knows what im going through story wise, hehe)

Thanks for the concrit!
 

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