critique lvl.2

Hello I am Uberle And welcome to the reposting of my current story run, Unfamiliar Faces I'm using my Neverlocke ruleset, which is quite simple I can't use Pokemon I've used before If they've ever been in my party for any reason whatsoever they can't be caught If you're wondering, here's the...

Thank you for the banner, @Emilianite ! Gameplay Summary (DO NOT CLICK UNLESS YOU WANT SUPER SPOILERS!) To commemorate the completion of Ashes To Ashes, I have chosen to release my Gameplay Notes. Note that I cut many fights, captures, etc. from the final story. This online...