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  1. localhoney

    Written Story Sinnoh Mature Behold, a Pale Horse!

    (Incredible banner work done by Rainey!) "And I looked, and behold, a pale horse! And its rider's name was Death..." - English Standard Version Bible Thank you for checking out Behold, a Pale Horse! A Pokemon Pearl Nuzlocke, but you'll note that much of the standard in-game plot devices have...
  2. d'angelo russell

    Written Story Sinnoh Teen Gijinka sudden sky - a renegade platinum storylocke

    the spark of a hope...the hope of a return sup guys and welcome to my new storylocke, this is sudden sky, a cyberpunk-themed storylocke of renegade platinum inspired heavily by one of my favorite web novels, the king's avatar as well as my old sensei @Clockenstein's run silicon lines. this...
  3. Zephyr_Iphis

    Written Story Hoenn Teen Mon Running Hot

    Sometimes in order to move forward, you have to look back. Or at least that’s what Latios says. So when the latest in a series of catastrophes sets her adrift, Ren tries to square with her demons and everything else, good and bad, that led her to this tipping point and plunged her over the edge...
  4. Zephyr_Iphis

    Written Story Alola Teen Mon The Night Grows Pale

    The Night Grows Pale A Sun & Moon Dual Nuzlocke About: Dual Protagonists, one from Alola and one from Johto, embark on the Island Challenge together. When long-time internet friends Makani and Azophi finally meet in person, it feels like life is taking a turn for the better. Along with Makani's...
  5. d'angelo russell

    Written Story Unova Teen Hack Gijinka sturm und drang - a pokemon blazeblack storylocke

    what if the magic came back? nominated for best plot and best protagonist in a written run (2018) -------------------------------------------------------------------------- [/spoiler] [/spoiler]
  6. sky_

    Screenshot Fan Game Mature Mon Reckless Renewal: A Pokémon Reborn Storyshot Nuzlocke (Update: sadly cancelled due to significant ethical concerns about the fangame's origins)

    "I shut my eyes, and it all floods back..." Update: This run has been cancelled. Please see my post on Page 2 for more details as to why I want nothing more to do with this fangame. Lucia leapt at the chance to challenge the hardest League in the world. What waited was an underbelly of...
  7. Bowser's Family Vacation

    Written Story Screenshot Sinnoh Written Log Mixed Media Teen Commentary Mon Jenga!

    Bad Photoshopping Banner By Me! Welcome to Jenga!: a castlocke of Pokemon Platinum, featuring the elderly-killing, door-despising, inimitable Vox Machina. If that name sounds familiar, either you have also invested literal weeks of your time into nerdy-ass voice actors playing Dungeons &...
  8. d'angelo russell

    Written Story Spin-off Teen Mon desert daze - a pokemon colosseum storylocke

    sunlight glints off echo canyon's rooftops. phenac's fountains bubble with laughter. the desert wind sings as it slices through pyrite's alleys. motion and change, signs of life, playing in an endless loop. the cycle continues into its final phase, yet three seek to escape. can they crack...
  9. Erberor

    Written Story Unova Mature Gijinka [Mature] - All That We Are - A Gijinka Journal of Blaze Black

    Marked as [Mature] for violence and extreme emotional distress (depression, grief) They called us Beast-Kin, and cast us out. But before long, we were all Kindred to the monsters that ended our world. Little is known about what led to the Calamity that brought the world to ruin. Some say it...
  10. Zephyr_Iphis

    Written Story Kalos Teen Mon Tightrope

    Aisling is a provincial girl trying on a new persona as she moves closer to bright, sparkling civilization and takes part in an exclusive pokemon training program run by the illustrious Sycamore Labs. Impressing the professor enough to get into the even more exclusive mega evolution program and...
  11. glancesherlock

    Written Story Johto Teen Once Upon a Mountain

    This is a HeartGold Storylocke set in a fantasy alternate universe about a knight and a princess and their quest to reunite with one another. Never tried my hand at high-fantasy romance before. All I know is the world needs more gay fairytales, and everyone has a cape. Once Upon a Mountain on...
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