critique lvl 3

(Incredible banner work done by Rainey!) "And I looked, and behold, a pale horse! And its rider's name was Death..." - English Standard Version Bible ~Thank you for checking out Behold, a Pale Horse! A Pokemon Pearl Nuzlocke~ You'll find the rules I'm using throughout the run in the spoiler...

the spark of a hope...the hope of a return sup guys and welcome to my new storylocke, this is sudden sky, a cyberpunk-themed storylocke of renegade platinum inspired heavily by one of my favorite web novels, the king's avatar as well as my old sensei @Clockenstein's run silicon lines. this...

Sometimes in order to move forward, you have to look back. Or at least that’s what Latios says. So when the latest in a series of catastrophes sets her adrift, Ren tries to square with her demons and everything else, good and bad, that led her to this tipping point and plunged her over the edge...

The Night Grows Pale A Sun & Moon Dual Nuzlocke About: Dual Protagonists, one from Alola and one from Johto, embark on the Island Challenge together. When long-time internet friends Makani and Azophi finally meet in person, it feels like life is taking a turn for the better. Along with Makani's...

what if the magic came back? nominated for best plot and best protagonist in a written run (2018) -------------------------------------------------------------------------- [/spoiler] [/spoiler]

"I shut my eyes, and it all floods back..." Update: This run has been cancelled. Please see my post on Page 2 for more details as to why I want nothing more to do with this fangame. Lucia leapt at the chance to challenge the hardest League in the world. What waited was an underbelly of...

Bad Photoshopping Banner By Me! Welcome to Jenga!: a castlocke of Pokemon Platinum, featuring the elderly-killing, door-despising, inimitable Vox Machina. If that name sounds familiar, either you have also invested literal weeks of your time into nerdy-ass voice actors playing Dungeons &...

sunlight glints off echo canyon's rooftops. phenac's fountains bubble with laughter. the desert wind sings as it slices through pyrite's alleys. motion and change, signs of life, playing in an endless loop. the cycle continues into its final phase, yet three seek to escape. can they crack...

Marked as [Mature] for violence and extreme emotional distress (depression, grief) They called us Beast-Kin, and cast us out. But before long, we were all Kindred to the monsters that ended our world. Little is known about what led to the Calamity that brought the world to ruin. Some say it...

Aisling is a provincial girl trying on a new persona as she moves closer to bright, sparkling civilization and takes part in an exclusive pokemon training program run by the illustrious Sycamore Labs. Impressing the professor enough to get into the even more exclusive mega evolution program and...

This is a HeartGold Storylocke set in a fantasy alternate universe about a knight and a princess and their quest to reunite with one another. Never tried my hand at high-fantasy romance before. All I know is the world needs more gay fairytales, and everyone has a cape. Once Upon a Mountain on...