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  1. glancesherlock

    Written Story Kalos General Gijinka A Light for the Lost [COMPLETE]

    Tell me everything that happened, tell me everything you saw. They had lights inside their eyes. They had lights inside their eyes. Did you see the closing window? Did you hear the slamming door? They moved forward, and my heart died. They moved forward, and my heart died. Please, please tell...
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