critique lv. 5

Hi, everyone! Here's my ongoing nuzlocke from Pokemon Platinum. The run is finished, but the comic is ongoing. It's my first time using a forum, so expect some edits upon edits, as I figure how it works :P Rules: Catch the first pokemon in every route. When a pokemon faints, this happens...

“Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting... dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before.” —Edgar Allan Poe

Había una vez una princesa encantadora. Muchos valientes caballeros habían intentado liberarla de la terrible prisión, pero ninguno prevaleció. Esperó en la fortaleza del dragón, en la habitación más alta de la torre más alta, su verdadero amor y el primer beso del verdadero...

Welcome to Locke-ception! This run, dare I say it, may end up being the most time-consuming Nuzlocke ever posted on the forums. The premise is simple: with every death in our run, we have to finish a whole additional Nuzlocke before we're allowed to keep going. A more detailed description is in...

Initializing... Running diagnostics... Logging in... Good evening, Milo! Synthesizing surroundings... Preparing cloud data... Would you like to sync music upon entry? >Yes No Loading ISLAND Radio... +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ On The Run is a storylocke set in near-future Alola. It...

banner: rainey seasonchild is a story about things that change. i originally started this at the beginning of this year as a project in forcing myself to write on a regular schedule. some things don't pan out, least of which was the bad idea of playing my save over an existing one (which meant...