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Thread cover banner by @Cas! Hey, guess who's finally posting content on nuzlockeforums.com? So, this run has been my baby for a while. I finished the gameplay in December 2020 and it’s kind of been an on-and-off WIP ever since. I think I rewrote the first three chapters something like two...

♣️ ♦️ ♥️ ♠️ You've got to know when to hold 'em Know when to fold 'em Know when to walk away And know when to run You never count your money When you're sittin' at the table There'll be time enough for countin' When the dealin's done Welcome to my storylocke based on a run of Pokémon R.O.W.E...

So this was originally going to be a full-fledged storylocke, and indeed I might well eventually come back and write it out as a full thing, but I decided I'd try my hand at writing something shorter, compressing a nuzlocke into just a dozen or so chapters. My aim is hopefully to update every...

Good morning/afternoon/evening (depending on your time zone and time of reading this), fellow Nuzlockers! This is a story I've had in the works for a very long time, and I'm super excited to be finally bringing it to you! A while back, the Alphabetlocke caught my attention, and I decided to try...

Well, folks, the day has come. The day I finally bite the bullet and post not only my first true written story, but my first PLANNED, GAMEPLAY IS FINISHED posted run. That means I don't have the "it's nothing serious, I was just writing as I play" excuse I hid behind with my last two runs if...

So, this is the storylocke I had on the backburner. Based on (part of, I'm currently halfway through) a run of Pokémon Blue I started at the end of last year. This ain't going to be about actual Pokémon, I've never really been good at writing about the little devils ever, so this will be all...

Hello! This is my first storylocke on the forum. I used to write short stories for my nuzlockes all the time and after a couple of years hiatus decided to get back into writing stories again. I have never really shared them with the world because I have always been kind of embarrassed by my...

NEMINI CREDE (trust nobody) [ON DEVIANTART] [TUMBLR BLOG] [COMICFURY] An insecure self depreciating teenager tries to get as far as she can through the Sinnoh league while dealing with terrorists and eldritch gods. And trying not to get her team killed. - Hi I'm Hana, community lurker...

So... I guess we're doing it! As this is the first thread in (hopefully) many to come, I guess this warrants an explanation: TL;DR; My intention is to play through the entire series in nuzlocke runs because the regular games low difficulty just makes it not fun for me. Back to the jam, in this...

A little bit ago I wrote a little piece of flash fiction about the Grim Reaper as kind of an attempt at comforting myself, I guess. I ended up kinda liking it and wanted to post it here just to have it SOMEWHERE that isn't a discord server haha! --- The Grim Reaper didn’t think he was cruel...

Hello and welcome to Sunlit Memories, an idea I've had for a while now that I decided to just get started on writing out! Might as well have pokemon fans Consume the results, right? I may cross post these to ao3, but i'm unsure! What's the premise of this? Well... basically, there's a...

Rules: If a pokemon faints, it's boxed and rendered unable to battle again. Only catch the first pokemon encountered in an area. You may ignore and retry if it's a duplicate. Shiny pokemon may be freely caught. Table of Contents: Chapter One Chapter Two Chapter Three Opening Notes: I don't...

So if you hang around the Discord servers, you may or may not have noticed the incredible amount of time I have been pumping into Final Fantasy XIV lately. The game has me hooked, and I thought what better way to both appreciate the experience and kick my writing muscles back into gear than by...

“You told me years ago that all you wanted was to keep me. And that’s all I want, too.” 🥇 1st Place Winner of Best Dynamic in a Written Run for Naomi and Kenneth 🥇 (2020 Extravaganza) about table of contents

A race between childhood friends Adi and Griff for fame and for glory. An order of knights fallen from grace. A misadventure unravels much faster then they expected. Update Schedule: Sporadic for now Last Update: 4/9/2023 --- Prologue P-1 P-2 P-3 1-1 --- Hey there! I've decided to...

Hello everybody! This is the very first written nuzlocke I've done based on my Soul Silver run that I've done a few years back. I actually had it on AO3 a while back but I decided to rewrite it and that became outdated and I wiped all the old stuff from AO3. Speaking of which, read it on AO3...

Hello I am Uberle And welcome to my first go at a fully written run Why yes I am very nervous So ruleset is pretty generic 1. First encounter 2. Nickname everything 3. Faint=Box Now quick notes about the randomization Alola has a weird reaction to being randomized See trainer's Pokemon are...

Why, hello there! Good to have you back! Last time, we followed young Bertholomew, or Bert, through Unova on his quest to complete a challenging Nuzlocke run and become Champion. This time, we’re heading back to Unova! However, we’re skipping ahead two years, during which a lot has happened to...

Hi again! It's still Tookie, I'm still on Mirror World, but because I am an absolute font of very good ideas, I'm doing Mirror World 2... 2! With a second character near and dear to my heart to put through the wringer in different dark and horrible ways, no less- have no fear, this won't impact...

In a World where Humanity no longer exists; A Scarred Poochyena, a young Mudkip, and many other Pokémon will begin their journey across the chaotic new region of Hoenn, with the hopes of reaching a better life. Good Evening Everybody; After months of intense planning, Here I present to you my...