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  1. Ymir

    Screenshot Johto Teen Chaos Kaleidoscope -- a Crystal Giftlocke storyshot

    So, I realized I like writing, and I want to improve my writing a lot. However, I also like the linearity screenshots provide. So... let's go.
  2. Bowser's Family Vacation

    Screenshot Johto Written Log Teen Commentary Paper Bowser and the Thousand-Year Grind

    Updates between training sessions. You see, it all started when Bowser got interested in the lorelocke ruleset and thought Johto, the region in Pokemon that seems to be the most “old-fashioned” or in-tune with its legends, would be an appropriate setting… [/TD] [/TR] Goombario (Starter)...
  3. Wwarborday

    Written Story Teen Knights of Cydonia

    Hello! Welcome to Knights of Cydonia, that Kalos run I've been teasing for forever. This is, once again, an all human, real world story. It's uh... experimental? Here's the song, btw. Updates for this baby are gonna be about three months apart. (I'm busy, guys.) Thanks for reading...
  4. overkill

    Written Story Kanto Mature The Crazed Idol

    Howdy, my name is overkill What you are about to read is a lovely tale about some stupid little fucker getting a Pokemon and going on an journey, filled with battling, romance, cannibalism, politics, and war. Some things happen, some angry individuals show up, God takes a crap in a toilet. You...