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  1. localhoney

    Written Process The Nuzwriter's Lounge: Action Writing Panel & Workshop

    Hi, Nuzforums! Local here, to announce that the mod team over in the Nuzwriter's Lounge discord server is cooking up something! We're planning a hybrid open panel/workshop, centered around writing action scenes in storylockes! Now, of the infinite potential topics we could've picked, we tried...
  2. localhoney

    Written Story Galar Teen Colossus

    Hm. I fell very far behind. And I have missed quite a bit! I have tried to come up with some coherent thought to sum the past few chapters but I'll stick with: taz... good. colossus... also good. So this is the part in the story where we get athlete/reporter drama a la Jimmy Butler/Rachel...
  3. localhoney

    IT'S COMING ROME 🇮🇹

    IT'S COMING ROME 🇮🇹
  4. localhoney

    Written Story Sinnoh Mature [6/7/2021] Behold, A Pale Horse! [localhoney]

    Yes, I said we'd be back to regular every-other-week updates. Life gets in the way and motivation decided to leave as soon as I started this back up, soooooo, it'll probably be an update schedule more akin to once a month. (Though now that I've said it, it might end up being every other month...
  5. localhoney

    Written Story Sinnoh Mature [6/7/2021] Behold, A Pale Horse! [localhoney]

    Yes, it's not Thursday. I was tired after work and fell asleep and didn't update. "But local," you ask, "isn't it Saturday?" Yes, it's Saturday. I also did not update yesterday. But more importantly, we got a fucking feature!!! It feels incredible to have BaPH recognized as being worth...
  6. localhoney

    Vikavolt, Apple Jacks

    Vikavolt, Apple Jacks
  7. localhoney

    Written Story Sinnoh Mature [6/7/2021] Behold, A Pale Horse! [localhoney]

    And we're back! Yes, it's been a long time but I have a very good reason to be back: it's the Behold, a Pale Horse! Anniversary! Yes, my idiot son has existed for an entire calendar year and holy shit (excuse me, while I get sappy and somewhat emotional on main). When I came back to the...
  8. localhoney

    I swear BaPH will be back soon BUT, If y'all are at all interested in FE3H and Hilda and...

    I swear BaPH will be back soon BUT, If y'all are at all interested in FE3H and Hilda and Ferdinand, check out my new one-shot on AO3! https://archiveofourown.org/works/31363991
  9. localhoney

    Written Story Galar Teen Colossus

    You really captured the energy of a sports stadium to a fuckin tee, but that's to be expected haha. Even the part where Taz has to acknowledge that the stadium's fans tend to sway games even if it's a pain for his own squad def reminded me of a couple arenas. I especially liked the contrast...
  10. localhoney

    Written Story Johto Mature Gijinka [COMPLETE] Path to the Stars

    He's here! We've made it!!! And everyone knows a HGSS nuzlocke would be incomplete without fighting Red, I mean Jake, so I'm very 👀 On another note, the description of the climb becoming easy, like a game to them, was interesting because it got me thinking if it was because they were together...
  11. localhoney

    Written Story Alola General Don't Fear The Reaper

    Really enjoyed this chapter! Been a while since I had time to sit and read, well, much of anything so this was a nice piece to open up my appetite, especially with all the different perspectives we tend to get. Dug Lillie's part, when she was analyzing the similarities between her and her...
  12. localhoney

    Written Story Sinnoh Mature [6/7/2021] Behold, A Pale Horse! [localhoney]

    And here is the second part of what is so far, my favorite part of this entire fic! And of course, as I reach Snowpoint, which is what I've been most excited for, school starts to ramp up and I fall into a mean writing slump. All this to say, BaPH will be going on a brief hiatus, hopefully of...
  13. localhoney

    Written Story Sinnoh Mature [6/7/2021] Behold, A Pale Horse! [localhoney]

    Alright, y'all, we've been building up to some big shit and now it's fucking HERE! This is the biggest Pale Horse chapter to date, clocking in at around 3.5k, and trust me, it's worth it hehe. Without further ado...
  14. localhoney

    Written Story Galar Teen Colossus

    I could've fucking sworn on everything I commented on this the first time I read it, which was like, few days after you dropped it. Appears that it is not the case so I must rectify this error. And lemme tell ya, when I saw this I practically jumped out of my seat. For some reason people love...
  15. localhoney

    Written Story Alola Teen Come Hell Or High Water

    oH now I understand what you were talking about with this fight scene. It's easily one of your best, and I'm including GitM in that ranking. It builds and Tamaya comes across equally competent and panicked and honestly, it practically reads itself. The tension makes the length feel like nothing...
  16. localhoney

    Written Story Sinnoh Mature [6/7/2021] Behold, A Pale Horse! [localhoney]

    y'all, we're so fucking close to some cool shit (and perhaps some reveals). god, I can't wait. (also @Wwarborday here's your ping) also also this one's a little shorter than usual but the next two are chonkier to make up for it
  17. localhoney

    Written Story Alola Teen Come Hell Or High Water

    whoza, you're killing me. not only do you force Tamaya to stay in Alola (which like, duh, plot and Shit), not only do you make Hau give her girly stickers intended for his dead friend, no, you have to fucking poison Looker. I hate you. I love it but I hate you. I'm so fucking stressed for this...
  18. localhoney

    Written Story Johto Mature Gijinka [COMPLETE] Path to the Stars

    god damn we're finally getting to THE THING i'm actually so excited for that and it's actually wild that Garath and Evena have met them both 🤔 i'm still nervous because you mentioned in discord that things are winding down but i still have so many questions but the utmost faith that you'll wrap...
  19. localhoney

    Comic Unova Teen Gijinka Godless Lands - A Pokemon White Gijinkalocke

    god I fell behind but fuck i'm so excited for the rest of the journey. also those color panels are always fucking incredible, wow.
  20. localhoney

    Written Story Sinnoh Mature [6/7/2021] Behold, A Pale Horse! [localhoney]

    Before today's chapter, I wanted to get mushy for 0.3 seconds. I wanna thank all of you that voted for Behold, a Pale Horse! in the Extravaganza. I am blown away that it took home the gold in Most Improved and in Best Supporting (thanks to our golden boy, Deion!). I definitely did not expect...
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