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Comic Alola Mature Mon Sundowner - An Ultra Sun Nuzlocke

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Updates biweekly on mondays! [Latest: 05/19, Page 21]

Alba Corbina

Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Screenshotter
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
581
Caught
Jul 26, 2019
Messages
96
Nature
Quirky
Pronouns
She/Her
Pokémon Type
Dark, Fairy
Can't wait to see what's got everyone so riled up about Lehua.
 

Dschubba

Has forgotten she's a diurnal creature.
Artist
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
1011
Caught
Nov 13, 2019
Messages
83
Location
Malie Garden
Nature
Careful
Pronouns
Female
Pokémon Type
Bug, Normal
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Is that... a parent's name I see? Hey, they have to be better than Lusamine.
Pff, if we have a fine example of a 0 outta 10, the only way to go is up! Possibly. Probably!

Def like that there's a lot of intrigue going on in this page, especially the last panel and Leh's: "Ah shit, here we go again." Face XD
That face when...ALOLA. To which no small number of very disgruntled rats in a very rainy town would crush a can in MOOD.

Ugh, your Pokemon look so cool! Really digging the designs.

Lehua's neat! Private Detective isn't the most common protagonist profession, and already it's played with in the plot in a fun way. Looking forward to seeing how she juggles all the problems falling into her lap.
Thanks a bunch! Means a lot to hear that, since I'm still settling into drawing mons again, it's always a fun tightrope walk of how much to stylize.

In general, I noticed that adult protagonists are very rare - and the whole PI thing felt pretty natural for Alola. Just from that very...and another thing! nature of the plot. Theft! Aliens! More aliens! A gang! The hardboiled cup runneth over~

Hm, those townsfolk don't have particularly nice things to whisper about Lehua. There's clearly a lot of history between her and this island ceremony, and it's not good history. No wonder she stays away where she can, but also, this is going to unfold in an interesting way and I'm excited to see it.
Oh yes, it is fun to set up all of the bad blood going on that's for certain. Very much going by some very very stifling vibes I got from Alolan traditions that I got on my various playthroughs, so expect that all of this is gonna get elaborated upon :)

Oh I just adore this set up, I can already tell there's gonna be some juicy conflict from this scenario and it lets us get a tiny glimpse of our protagonist's past, super excited to see how this unfolds! (Side note, Fizz's expression in that one panel is just adorable)
Hehehe, yup. Conflict - it really is the lifeblood of a setup and I'm marinading in working on the build. And Fizz sure is giving me some appreciation for the OG electric rodents I didn't know I had.

Now this? This is Sang to a T and I love it to b

Can't wait to see what's got everyone so riled up about Lehua.
Glad to hear the build's proving to be interesting! And all will be clear in time~ all I can say so far that my interpretation of Alola is a bit less sunshine and rainbows than what the game tries to portray, so that'll be a deep dive :v:



Page 21 is up on Deviantart!

Finally we're getting into some action again! Time for one sassy little taser mouse to show he's not just all talk~
 

Riboo

Conqueror of the Viridian Gym
Artist
Team Omega
Pokédex No.
1085
Caught
Nov 24, 2019
Messages
114
Nature
Lax
Pokémon Type
Electric
Pff, that moment when you're trying to take a battle seriously XD
 

Bowser's Family Vacation

Johto League Champion
Writer
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
301
Caught
Jul 1, 2019
Messages
973
Nature
Rash
Pronouns
She/her
Pokémon Type
Dragon, Cool
Pokédex Entry
"Am I Mario's babysitter? Are you going to call me every time that guy blows his nose, or what?"
I love that Hau's nonchalance (which seems pretty close to canon so far) contrasts with the other people. We stan a good boyo. Hau's Pichu is a good too! :3
 

Kadew

*bird sounds*
🌱Featurer
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
38
Caught
Jun 10, 2019
Messages
822
Location
A Dry Place
Nature
Careful
Pronouns
Pokémon Type
Grass, Normal
Pokédex Entry
Doesn't actually like birds all that much.
I'm glad that our girl's got at least two people, hau and lillie, that aren't muttering against her as she goes out.

Those pichu are both such butterballs lol
 

lostballoon

sleepytime tea connoisseur
Writer
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
335
Caught
Jul 2, 2019
Messages
43
Location
lindsay lohan's party island
Nature
Jolly
Pronouns
she/her
Pokémon Type
Grass, Fairy
Hau and Lillie are such sweeties!! I'm glad Leh has at least a couple kids in her corner!! Also I LOVE that Hau's Pichu wants to be pals and helps to diffuse some of the tension built up by Leh's history with the townsfolk and the ceremony itself.
 

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