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Comic Unova General Mon Road Map Not Included: A White Nuzlocke

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5/20 - Page 19!

ashdrawsarts

Conqueror of the Celadon Gym
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
452
Caught
Jul 9, 2019
Messages
31
Nature
Quiet
Pronouns
They/them
Pokémon Type
Ghost, ???

Summary:
Finley’s idea is simple: get a pokemon, go on an adventure, hang out with friends, beat some gyms, see some cool cities, and defeat the most powerful trainer in the region! Unfortunately, life isn’t exactly known for going according to plan

Rules:
  1. Can only catch the first pokemon on each route
  2. If a pokemon faints it is considered dead
  3. Must nickname all pokemon
  4. No duplicates
  5. Can only use one item per pokemon in battle
  6. No legendaries
  7. Inner and outer Pinwheel Forest count as two separate areas


So hey! I decided to make a nuzlocke comic! There are a lot of reasons for that, but one of them is just that these types of comics really inspired me when I was younger. I'm not sure if I would be as into webcomics as i am now if it weren't for nuzlockes, and I felt like it was time I contributed! The story is based off of a run of White I did over the summer and it was just so much fun to go through and I hope to do it justice. This is going to be a bit experimental, but I hope you enjoy!


Updates every other Wednesday!


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sugar heart

nono morikubo is a qt
Screenshotter
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
257
Caught
Jul 1, 2019
Messages
192
Location
346 pro
Nature
Quirky
Pronouns
she/they
Pokémon Type
Fairy, Normal
Pokédex Entry
hello, i like idols.
aaaaah!?

YOUR ART IS SO???? PRECIOUS?!?!?

ONLY PROLOGUE AND I????? ALREADY LOVE THIS RUN

BEST OF LUCK WITH THIS RUN
 

Purpl

Fake vintage TV for sale
Artist
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
480
Caught
Jul 11, 2019
Messages
19
Nature
Calm
Pronouns
He/him
Pokémon Type
Ice, Normal
Pokédex Entry
This Pokémon usually stays in his natural habitat thinking about things, but never taking action.
This looks like a really fun comic! Your art style looks great and I can’t wait to see more of this!
 

ashdrawsarts

Conqueror of the Celadon Gym
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
452
Caught
Jul 9, 2019
Messages
31
Nature
Quiet
Pronouns
They/them
Pokémon Type
Ghost, ???
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #4
@sugar heart Aaaaaaah!!! Thank you so much!!! 💕💕💕 I'm glad you like it!

@DerpPurpl Thank you! I'm looking forward to making more!!
 

Kadew

*bird sounds*
🌱Featurer
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
38
Caught
Jun 10, 2019
Messages
822
Location
A Dry Place
Nature
Careful
Pronouns
Pokémon Type
Grass, Normal
Pokédex Entry
Doesn't actually like birds all that much.
I'm already sold on this sweet supportive family, please only let good things happen to them. I'll be watching.
 

ashdrawsarts

Conqueror of the Celadon Gym
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
452
Caught
Jul 9, 2019
Messages
31
Nature
Quiet
Pronouns
They/them
Pokémon Type
Ghost, ???
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #6
@Kadew :D good to hear! I wanted their dynamic to be something nice and that made it super fun to write! And of course, only good things here :3
 

Kadew

*bird sounds*
🌱Featurer
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
38
Caught
Jun 10, 2019
Messages
822
Location
A Dry Place
Nature
Careful
Pronouns
Pokémon Type
Grass, Normal
Pokédex Entry
Doesn't actually like birds all that much.
Sinvy! I love Clover already, and definitely not because I'm a sucker for both snakes and grass types. I'm already enjoying the friendly dynamic of our main trio, and Juniper's little bit about annoyed league officials in her lab is great, just a bunch of small charming interactions that all add up to a pleasant page to read!
 

Uberle

Lur King
Screenshotter
Team Omega
Pokédex No.
209
Caught
Jun 30, 2019
Messages
174
Nature
Lax
Pronouns
he/him
Pokémon Type
Fire
Pokédex Entry
Stays in the distortion dimension where no one bother him
This is just so pure I love it

Clover looks so uninterested in what's going on
I love him already
 

ashdrawsarts

Conqueror of the Celadon Gym
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
452
Caught
Jul 9, 2019
Messages
31
Nature
Quiet
Pronouns
They/them
Pokémon Type
Ghost, ???
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #10
@Kadew Clover is a joy to draw because he is just a bendy noodle and it gives me an excuse to look up pictures of pet snakes,,, And thank you! I'm glad you enjoy the character interactions, they're one of the things I spend the most time on when scripting!

@Uberle ^-^ thanks! And yeah, Clover isn't exactly thrilled to be here
 

sugar heart

nono morikubo is a qt
Screenshotter
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
257
Caught
Jul 1, 2019
Messages
192
Location
346 pro
Nature
Quirky
Pronouns
she/they
Pokémon Type
Fairy, Normal
Pokédex Entry
hello, i like idols.
clover looks,,, so pure and adorable; i already lOve him;;;

also i wonder what juniper did to get annoyed league officials in her lab...
 

ashdrawsarts

Conqueror of the Celadon Gym
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
452
Caught
Jul 9, 2019
Messages
31
Nature
Quiet
Pronouns
They/them
Pokémon Type
Ghost, ???
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #12
@sugar heart Clover is getting all this love already omg,,, I'm glad people like him!

Also hmmm... what could have caused that...

The world may never know
 

Kadew

*bird sounds*
🌱Featurer
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
38
Caught
Jun 10, 2019
Messages
822
Location
A Dry Place
Nature
Careful
Pronouns
Pokémon Type
Grass, Normal
Pokédex Entry
Doesn't actually like birds all that much.
Nice call on cutting the baby rival battles, speeding things along from tutorial town is always good in my books. And we already got a snippit of the starters' character without the battle, that oshawott in particular stood out, the tiny baby edgelord. "Your reckoning will come another day" indeed haha. I also like how everyone with eyes can see that Bianca's plan is terrible and bound to blow up in her face the second her father inevitably finds out. I wish them the best of luck in pinning her down to talk about it later.
 

Squiggy Azalea

a goode boy
Moderator
🎇Contributor
Screenshotter
Team Omega
Pokédex No.
15
Caught
May 20, 2019
Messages
313
Location
italy
Nature
Jolly
Pronouns
He/they
Pokémon Type
Electric, Grass
Pokédex Entry
pizza pasta mamma mia
this looks like a really cute nuzcomic! i like the artstyle, and i also like the neat interactions between the characters as well :D

gonna try and follow this one for sure: good luck on the run as well! really curious to see the rest of this comic!
 

ashdrawsarts

Conqueror of the Celadon Gym
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
452
Caught
Jul 9, 2019
Messages
31
Nature
Quiet
Pronouns
They/them
Pokémon Type
Ghost, ???
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #16
@Kadew Honestly Oshawott's lines were changed super last minute because I just enjoyed the new ones so much better and they made everything so much more enjoyable! And yeah, I set a goal to spend as few pages in Nuvema as possible just to get out of tutorial land faster. Bianca's plan is... certainly something and the other two are definitely still Concerned, but we'll just have to see how well they do at getting her to actually consider the consequences

@Squiggy Azalea Awww thank you! :D I hope you like how it continues!
 

mykehroo

holy moly i am worry
Artist
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
571
Caught
Jul 23, 2019
Messages
84
Location
why do you want to know
Nature
Adamant
Pronouns
i'm a dude brooooo
Pokémon Type
Grass, Ghost
Pokédex Entry
This Pokémon is currently kerfuffled by this feature. Kerfuffled isn't a word.
This. This stuff right here. It fuels me.

also the interaction between Clover and Oshawott lmao

Keep up the good work!
 

ashdrawsarts

Conqueror of the Celadon Gym
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
452
Caught
Jul 9, 2019
Messages
31
Nature
Quiet
Pronouns
They/them
Pokémon Type
Ghost, ???
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #18
Time for Route 1!

Page 3

@mykehroo Thank you! I'm glad I could provide the fuel ^^
 

LemonTea

Conqueror of the Vermillion Gym
Team Omega
Pokédex No.
849
Caught
Sep 26, 2019
Messages
19
Nature
Relaxed
Pokémon Type
Grass, Water
This run is adorable!
Honestly I'm loving Finn's supportive family. Like, family drama is a staple of Nuzlocke storytelling but it's sooooo refreshing when the main character just has an uncomplicated, loving and caring relationship with their parents.

Hahaha, Bianca's terrible ideas are super relatable.

I'm already looking forward to the next page!
 

ashdrawsarts

Conqueror of the Celadon Gym
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
452
Caught
Jul 9, 2019
Messages
31
Nature
Quiet
Pronouns
They/them
Pokémon Type
Ghost, ???
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #20
Update!

Page 4

@LemonTea Aw, thanks! I totally agree with you on the family relationship stuff. While there's a lot of interesting things you can do with a bunch of drama in the family, I feel like there's also a bunch of interesting things that can be done when the main character has an actually good relationship with their parents. Plus it's just fun to write!
 

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