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Comic Kanto Teen Mon Rainbow Tour: Fire Red Nuzlocke

Thread Description
Last Update: October 3 2019

mizar

young, dumb, and full of you know ;)
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
76
Caught
Jun 16, 2019
Messages
143
Location
lost
Nature
Quiet
Pronouns
they/them
Pokémon Type
Dragon
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #41
Hey guys! Page 7 is up!!


Also on another note, I got a fancy new signature a few days ago, now that a few pokemon on the team have been introduced. My old banner was kinda make shift so it was a much needed change ;u;
Also before I forget,
*gasp* a baby! Island is precious, I love the shapes! Round and soft but leggy and articulate, so good. The fight was a delight, I love the Helios and Aquila so much, especially that one panel of charmander's mouth all :V ready for snacks. It's a shame eevee is still being shady as ever. Very trustworty.
haha yeah Island wants to be all tough but his appearance isn't helping. Glad you liked the fight, it was the first time I choreographed a fight and I try

This is such a lovely run! I adore the art (your backgrounds are phenomenal! So moody and lovely!), I'm really digging the worldbuilding, and I'm excited to see where it goes!
awww thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far 🥰
 

Kadew

*bird sounds*
🌱Featurer
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
38
Caught
Jun 10, 2019
Messages
350
Location
A Dry Place
Nature
Careful
Pronouns
♀
Pokémon Type
Grass, Normal
Pokédex Entry
Doesn't actually like birds all that much.
Dang, that's quite the thunderstorm! I love how you do your skies, the colors and clouds are delicious. Really all the backgrounds are great, particularly those shots of the packed goods, the sleeping bag roll and food supplies. The small details make a second readthrough more than worth it, to catch things like the "Cereal O's" or zapdos chilling in the clouds.
 

Squiggy Azalea

a goode boy
🎇Contributor
Screenshotter
Team Omega
Pokédex No.
15
Caught
May 20, 2019
Messages
270
Location
italy
Nature
Jolly
Pronouns
He
Pokémon Type
Electric, Grass
Pokédex Entry
pizza pasta mamma mia
holy shit this is real good yo

im absolutely IN LOVE with ur art omfg holy crap

so good.... so fuckin good
 

Velink

Quod Erat Demonstrandum
Artist
Team Omega
Pokédex No.
152
Caught
Jun 27, 2019
Messages
39
Location
Zubat Roost
Nature
Relaxed
Pokémon Type
Ghost, Normal
no wonder the title is called "rainbow Tour"
Everywhere she goes, the sky of Kanto is just too colorful!
 

Wwarborday

Gradually Becoming Productive
Pokédex No.
153
Caught
Jun 28, 2019
Messages
26
Location
Gaytown
Nature
Sassy
Pronouns
He/him/his
Pokémon Type
Ground, Ice
Pokédex Entry
I'm Doing My Best
The ART,,,,,the SET-UP,,,,,,,I cannot say enough. Like holy shit, we are only seven pages in and I am more sucked in than I have been with published graphic novels. I'm hype as fuck. Watching for sure.
 

mizar

young, dumb, and full of you know ;)
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
76
Caught
Jun 16, 2019
Messages
143
Location
lost
Nature
Quiet
Pronouns
they/them
Pokémon Type
Dragon
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #46
Dang, that's quite the thunderstorm! I love how you do your skies, the colors and clouds are delicious. Really all the backgrounds are great, particularly those shots of the packed goods, the sleeping bag roll and food supplies. The small details make a second readthrough more than worth it, to catch things like the "Cereal O's" or zapdos chilling in the clouds.
aww thanks! I gave the backgrounds on this page extra care because I wanted to sell the whole "cozy camping trip" aesthetic. also lol i didn't think anyone would actually read the food lables

holy shit this is real good yo

im absolutely IN LOVE with ur art omfg holy crap

so good.... so fuckin good
thank you,,, this comic is my entire creative outlet

no wonder the title is called "rainbow Tour"
Everywhere she goes, the sky of Kanto is just too colorful!
Yeah that, and the whole "every city being named after a color" thing kanto has got going

The ART,,,,,the SET-UP,,,,,,,I cannot say enough. Like holy shit, we are only seven pages in and I am more sucked in than I have been with published graphic novels. I'm hype as fuck. Watching for sure.
*o* damn, it's great to hear this because intrigue/pacing is so hard to gauge while I'm making the pages. Thanks for reading!!!

also while I'm posting I might as well link a wip from the last page of the chapter that I put on my twitter (the end of the chapter isn't close but I have a buffer)
 

Kadew

*bird sounds*
🌱Featurer
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
38
Caught
Jun 10, 2019
Messages
350
Location
A Dry Place
Nature
Careful
Pronouns
♀
Pokémon Type
Grass, Normal
Pokédex Entry
Doesn't actually like birds all that much.
Foolish to think that reading the food labels isn't one of the best parts of comics. Everyone always has to make their own joke brands and it's always a delight. Also that wip is pretty swanky, you do a good job with fabric folds and wow that hair is incredible I want to fluff it.
 

Rubombee

the ace that stays up the sleeve
Artist
Writer
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
61
Caught
Jun 15, 2019
Messages
583
Location
somewhere in Kalos
Nature
Quirky
Pronouns
she/her
Pokémon Type
Water, Ghost
Pokédex Entry
Doesn't even eat baguette, are you sure she's French
Heyo!! I am reading thiss (page by page in case it wasnt obvious)

ok FIRST this is gorgeous like even the freakin grass looks amazing
eevee is SO CUTE

👀 whos procyon
D: oh nuu why angry??
also your backgrounds!! they're so nice!!!

eevee is the floofiest i love em
...or they could just suddenly look all funky wobbly i guess
((i love these angles!!))
aw man F for the flowers
ooo more wobbly stuff

👀👀 lore stuff!! so this is a pokémon-talk-when-they-trust-u kinda thing? :0
omg that face when they said "oh" I cant-
and btw whatever u may say i think that last panel looks super great

wartortle!! and that face i love this
that big battle panel they all look so nice!!! sorry i guess half my comment is just gonna be me spamming exclamation points
F for phoebe also
i want to screenshot so many panels of this
oooh the main character doesn't have the team?? now that's interesting not that everything else wasn't

THOSE SKIES CAN I SCREAM ABOUT THEM THEYRE SO PRETTY AAAAAA
also phoebe's hair hhh
and tiny phoebe i love tiny phoebe

THIS ART STYLE IS GORGEOUS AND I HAVE A LOT OF QUESTIONS (mostly about eevee,) I WILL BE WATCHING THIS
 
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mizar

young, dumb, and full of you know ;)
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
76
Caught
Jun 16, 2019
Messages
143
Location
lost
Nature
Quiet
Pronouns
they/them
Pokémon Type
Dragon
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #49


Page 8 is up!! I mentioned this in the description, but this was the last page I had made before I started posting the comic. Time flies.
@Rubombee Your comment was fun to read! thank you ;o;
 

Rubombee

the ace that stays up the sleeve
Artist
Writer
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
61
Caught
Jun 15, 2019
Messages
583
Location
somewhere in Kalos
Nature
Quirky
Pronouns
she/her
Pokémon Type
Water, Ghost
Pokédex Entry
Doesn't even eat baguette, are you sure she's French
👀👀👀👀👀

what do you mean there are different kinds of maps
oh wow eevee looks like a tired mood tho
omg mankey and phoebe's faces i cant-
WELP rip tire
aww aquila, what a cool pidgey
AGNES IS AN ANGEL
"let's go eevee" is that an unintentional 4th wall break
whoops eevee got a meal
come on don't just leave the tail!!

Conclusion:
eevee where are you going
 

Wwarborday

Gradually Becoming Productive
Pokédex No.
153
Caught
Jun 28, 2019
Messages
26
Location
Gaytown
Nature
Sassy
Pronouns
He/him/his
Pokémon Type
Ground, Ice
Pokédex Entry
I'm Doing My Best
That eevee scares me
 

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