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Comic Kanto Teen Mon Rainbow Tour: Fire Red Nuzlocke

Thread Description
Last Update: October 3 2019

mizar

young, dumb, and full of you know ;)
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
76
Caught
Jun 16, 2019
Messages
144
Location
lost
Nature
Quiet
Pronouns
they/them
Pokémon Type
Dragon
"I need to be thrilling, I want to be rainbow high
They need their escape, and so do I"




Game play finished in Winter 2018
Comic Started April 9, 2019
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Deviantart | Tumblr
Phoebe is 17, fresh out of high school, with no idea where to go next. In contrast, her sister Eva and brother Felix have just been hired by the world-famous Professor Oak to research pokemon across the Kanto region. Phoebe's mother urges her to become a trainer as she did, despite her lack of interest. Partially to get away from her mother, and partially for fun, she joins Eva in her travels. However, haunted by her past, she can't keep running from her future.
Also worth noting, since Phoebe is not interested in taking on the pokemon league, gym fights are handled in other ways.
Rules:

1. Box a pokemon if it faints.
2. Catch only the first pokemon encountered in a new area.
3. Nickname all pokemon.
4. Dupes clause- Pokemon of the same evolution line can't be caught twice. (If first encounter is repeat, have 2 more chances to find something new)
5. Shiny clause- Shinies can be caught no matter what. However, the pokemon originally found on that route must be released.
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Rules added later on: (after 2nd gym)
6. Level Limit- Highest level pokemon of next gym/elite 4
7. Only 1 healing item may be used per battle.
8. Must play on 'set'.
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Extra:
-Starter was chosen based on ID
-Gift pokemon allowed
-Because I did not have a way to evolve trade evolution pokemon, I choose not to include them.
Chapter 1​


I'm going to try my best to update on the first Friday of each month. There may be times where I can't keep to this schedule; I am in school and working! Anyway, hope you enjoy this little passion project of mine! :D
 
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Kadew

*bird sounds*
🌱Featurer
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
38
Caught
Jun 10, 2019
Messages
350
Location
A Dry Place
Nature
Careful
Pronouns
♀
Pokémon Type
Grass, Normal
Pokédex Entry
Doesn't actually like birds all that much.
*slams fists on table* I am READY for this passion project of yours, continuing in this shiny new thread on shiny new forums. I feel like the default theme here really complements your cover image, even.
 

MouseWithADinosaurTail

Luck will travel, but that's why I've got feet
Artist
Writer
Team Omega
Pokédex No.
47
Caught
Jun 15, 2019
Messages
613
Location
Post Town
Nature
Quirky
Pronouns
She/Her
Pokémon Type
Fairy, Flying
Pokédex Entry
Though she often appears sweet and polite, the smell of wrong opinions may cause this pokemon to latch bite.
Aw HELL YEAH, so glad this amazing comic has made it over to the new site!!! I'm so stoked for more!!!!!
 

snooze

stylish but illegal
Artist
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
48
Caught
Jun 15, 2019
Messages
21
Location
kalos
Nature
Naive
Pronouns
she/her
Pokémon Type
Bug, Fairy
Pokédex Entry
it lurks in dark caves to focus on its work, venturing outside only when encouraged to by its wife
man i gotta say again i just really really love this comic so far. like? the beautiful, painterly style? the stunning color palettes? the immediate mystery surrounding your protag and this strange eevee? sign me the heck up!! im so excited to see where the story goes!! *v*
 

Aozora

Chomp
🎇Contributor
Artist
Writer
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
9
Caught
May 15, 2019
Messages
42
Nature
Serious
Pokémon Type
Dark, Fairy
Pokédex Entry
Avatar by herbsyrup@twitter.
HI HOOOOO

I'm so stoked that you're here with us on this new board! I love your comic with your artstyle that is just [chefkiss] and also the immediate mystery surrounding Phoebe's trauma. Looking forward to more!
 

mizar

young, dumb, and full of you know ;)
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
76
Caught
Jun 16, 2019
Messages
144
Location
lost
Nature
Quiet
Pronouns
they/them
Pokémon Type
Dragon
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #6
everyone on this forum is so kind,, I love this community

*slams fists on table* I am READY for this passion project of yours, continuing in this shiny new thread on shiny new forums. I feel like the default theme here really complements your cover image, even.
YEEHAW! I LOVE YOUR ENTHUSIASM!!! After you said this I went back and compared it to the t*patalk page and you're right!! the grey looks much nicer. god I'm so happy we moved.

Aw HELL YEAH, so glad this amazing comic has made it over to the new site!!! I'm so stoked for more!!!!!
honey you got a big storm comin'

man i gotta say again i just really really love this comic so far. like? the beautiful, painterly style? the stunning color palettes? the immediate mystery surrounding your protag and this strange eevee? sign me the heck up!! im so excited to see where the story goes!! *v*
Snooze you kill me with your comments, thanks so much!!

HI HOOOOO

I'm so stoked that you're here with us on this new board! I love your comic with your artstyle that is just [chefkiss] and also the immediate mystery surrounding Phoebe's trauma. Looking forward to more!
Thank you! now only 5 years till that mystery actually gets solved oh god
 

Bigredlittlewolf

On the corner of happy and sleep depravity
🌱Featurer
Artist
Writer
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
12
Caught
May 16, 2019
Messages
140
Nature
Rash
Pronouns
She/Her
Pokémon Type
Fairy, Clever
Pokédex Entry
This user sometimes disappears for weeks on end to finish a single update, then bursts with activity for 30 hours straight.
HOO HOOO, I know I commented on deviantart, but now you're on the new forums and I can gremlin squat in your corner.

I REALLY love the colors you use. I think it's something I've mentioned before, but you have such a good eye for them. On top of that, you have me really interested in your characters going on's right off the bat!
And now, it might just be that I'm a furry.. and I'm a slut for eeveelutions. But god, damn. I love this edgy child already. He looks ready to fight just about anything, and I'll support him in his endeavors. On top of it being what seems to be a perfect match for our protagonist?
Whoops.

Oh, and the first post is looking absolutely great.
 

Lynslayer

SEKAI DE ICHIBAN OHIME-SAMA
Artist
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
111
Caught
Jun 19, 2019
Messages
41
Location
Sinnoh Route 216
Nature
Sassy
Pronouns
she/her
Pokémon Type
Water, Fairy
Pokédex Entry
It is very likely that this Pokemon is currently crying over anime.
i can't remember if i've commented on your run before :Oc either way BIG EXCITED FOR THIS COMIC!!! i love the ~mystery~ surrounding phoebe and whatever that sketchy (very cute) little eevee is up to
and like others have said, your color palettes are so good!! they really add to the Mood and are just really nice to look at uwu
 

BritishAirSnails

Member
Writer
Pokédex No.
90
Caught
Jun 16, 2019
Messages
80
Location
I come from my house
Nature
Modest
Pokémon Type
Grass, Fairy
Pokédex Entry
Beware the BritishAirSnail. They come from the sky and leave their slime EVERYWHERE
Hey, this comic is off to a rockin' start! I like your artstyle and am interested in the storyline already. Mystery eevee, moody teenager with some kind of trauma. Very interesting ;P Can't wait to see what's going to happen and learn more about our protag.
 

MouseWithADinosaurTail

Luck will travel, but that's why I've got feet
Artist
Writer
Team Omega
Pokédex No.
47
Caught
Jun 15, 2019
Messages
613
Location
Post Town
Nature
Quirky
Pronouns
She/Her
Pokémon Type
Fairy, Flying
Pokédex Entry
Though she often appears sweet and polite, the smell of wrong opinions may cause this pokemon to latch bite.
So, I have a small theory that is probably wrong, but I'm just gonna slide it in here anyway juuuuust in case! Sorry if you find this rude, Miz ;;u;;

But is that eevee Mewtwo?
 

Jimcloud

Administrator
Administrator
Moderator
🌱Featurer
🎇Contributor
Writer
Screenshotter
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
3
Caught
May 13, 2019
Messages
667
Pronouns
they/she
hey so im just sayin like, no bias here but Procyon is a perfect name for a Pokemon.

Also I'm really interested where this is going, I was interested from the beginning but page 3 there has me downright intrigued. what is goin on with this tiny basard. I love how you do that fluid effect, I could read a whole fucking comic done like that, oh my god, it'd be so cool.

Thank you for sharing this with us!!
 

ramendotexe

aka xj2z9
🎇Contributor
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
35
Caught
Jun 10, 2019
Messages
17
Location
An instant noodle factory
Nature
Lax
Pronouns
He/Him
Pokémon Type
Fire, Water
Pokédex Entry
Tastes like preservatives, the good kind.
Yo this comic looks freaking stellar already wow, and just three pages in too. I see a lot of big potential in this and I'm 100% here for it 👍
 

mizar

young, dumb, and full of you know ;)
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
76
Caught
Jun 16, 2019
Messages
144
Location
lost
Nature
Quiet
Pronouns
they/them
Pokémon Type
Dragon
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #13
HOO HOOO, I know I commented on deviantart, but now you're on the new forums and I can gremlin squat in your corner.

I REALLY love the colors you use. I think it's something I've mentioned before, but you have such a good eye for them. On top of that, you have me really interested in your characters going on's right off the bat!
And now, it might just be that I'm a furry.. and I'm a slut for eeveelutions. But god, damn. I love this edgy child already. He looks ready to fight just about anything, and I'll support him in his endeavors. On top of it being what seems to be a perfect match for our protagonist?
Whoops.

Oh, and the first post is looking absolutely great.
AHHH red thank you so much, I'm glad you like the colors because color theory is something I'm really trying to improve on. Man I can't wait until I can show Eevees gijinka because he is 100% edgelord
also: exhibit a of furry/eevee link: those eevee party videos that got viral in the 2000s

i can't remember if i've commented on your run before :Oc either way BIG EXCITED FOR THIS COMIC!!! i love the ~mystery~ surrounding phoebe and whatever that sketchy (very cute) little eevee is up to
and like others have said, your color palettes are so good!! they really add to the Mood and are just really nice to look at uwu
Thank you!! there's times I want to make the comic black and white but comments like this are so reassuring.

Hey, this comic is off to a rockin' start! I like your artstyle and am interested in the storyline already. Mystery eevee, moody teenager with some kind of trauma. Very interesting ;P Can't wait to see what's going to happen and learn more about our protag.
/throws all of kantos existing story in the trash/ Thank you!! I'm happy you're enjoying it so far.

So, I have a small theory that is probably wrong, but I'm just gonna slide it in here anyway juuuuust in case! Sorry if you find this rude, Miz ;;u;;

But is that eevee Mewtwo?
Hmmmm... I don't want to say anything but I love hearing your theories!

hey so im just sayin like, no bias here but Procyon is a perfect name for a Pokemon.

Also I'm really interested where this is going, I was interested from the beginning but page 3 there has me downright intrigued. what is goin on with this tiny basard. I love how you do that fluid effect, I could read a whole fucking comic done like that, oh my god, it'd be so cool.

Thank you for sharing this with us!!
lol thanks, Procyon is maybe the single name I did research on beforehand. Have you used it in a run before? (link it to me if you have I'd love to read it!)
time to start making the comic so blurry that it's illegible

Yo this comic looks freaking stellar already wow, and just three pages in too. I see a lot of big potential in this and I'm 100% here for it 👍
Thanks!!! hearing this is super encouraging. My goal is for every page to be better than before! (maybe not realistic, but it keeps me goin').
 

Emilianite

Active member
Artist
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
127
Caught
Jun 22, 2019
Messages
64
Pronouns
she/her
Pokémon Type
Ice
Im excited for this, it's off to a really nice start, curious about the characters already and i love how you work with colors (the cover is GORGEOUS)
lovely work!
 

mizar

young, dumb, and full of you know ;)
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
76
Caught
Jun 16, 2019
Messages
144
Location
lost
Nature
Quiet
Pronouns
they/them
Pokémon Type
Dragon
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #15
2410

Read the update here!

Note about this page: this is the first comic strip I ever drew (they were draw out of order). That being said, the art is from a year ago. The pages will go back to being drawn in chronilogical order starting with page 9 so it'll be a little bumpy until then. Sorry if it's distracting!
@Emilianite Thank you!! I love playing around with different color schemes. It makes each page feel refreshing to work on.
 

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MouseWithADinosaurTail

Luck will travel, but that's why I've got feet
Artist
Writer
Team Omega
Pokédex No.
47
Caught
Jun 15, 2019
Messages
613
Location
Post Town
Nature
Quirky
Pronouns
She/Her
Pokémon Type
Fairy, Flying
Pokédex Entry
Though she often appears sweet and polite, the smell of wrong opinions may cause this pokemon to latch bite.
Oh! So this world is a "You can talk to pokemon once you get close to them" world. Reminds me of Tightrope, I like it! :D
 

Kadew

*bird sounds*
🌱Featurer
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
38
Caught
Jun 10, 2019
Messages
350
Location
A Dry Place
Nature
Careful
Pronouns
♀
Pokémon Type
Grass, Normal
Pokédex Entry
Doesn't actually like birds all that much.
I do not trust this eevee and I do NOT trust that red glowreflection on that pokeball in the fifth panel. Something ain't right here. I do, however, trust this big sister. I love sisters. I hope we see more of her.
 

angryskitty

Active member
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
66
Caught
Jun 15, 2019
Messages
63
Location
Route 116
Nature
Sassy
Pronouns
she/her
Pokémon Type
Dark, Fairy
Pokédex Entry
It's adorable when it stares into the distance and has existential crises. It's difficult to earn its trust.
Oh my goodness, I love the style of your comic so much! Page 3 is sooo so good and I'm really impressed by your artistic skill so early in the comic. I can't wait to see what the rest of your comic holds and what mysteries surround Eevee! :0

(true they may seem a little odd and untrustworthy but i love this fluff child)
 

Lynslayer

SEKAI DE ICHIBAN OHIME-SAMA
Artist
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
111
Caught
Jun 19, 2019
Messages
41
Location
Sinnoh Route 216
Nature
Sassy
Pronouns
she/her
Pokémon Type
Water, Fairy
Pokédex Entry
It is very likely that this Pokemon is currently crying over anime.
camping adventure! camping adventure!

im loving the whole Vibe of this page, it has a sort of nostalgic feel to it with them driving down the road and just being sisters. and you immediately can tell what their relationship is like. i already love their dynamic!

I'm Sure Nothing's Wrong With The Eevee
 

Feymark

Gay Rights!!
Artist
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
73
Caught
Jun 16, 2019
Messages
30
Location
New York, New York
Nature
Adamant
Pronouns
He/Him/They
Pokémon Type
Fighting, Steel
Pokédex Entry
Warriormale wishes he loved men as much as Feymark. Also, he wishes he could draw them like Feymark.
This is such a cute comic! It's giving me heaaavy Stranger Things vibes! Fun in the summer but be careful! Strange Things lurk!

The eevee is giving me heavy cryptid and side eye energy. I'm squinting hard, but not in a bad way. In a "Who are you...?" way. Suspicious little bastard man!

I drew you a little Final Fantasy style logo to show my love. I was doodlin it while listening to Stranger Things and Inspiration struck!!
 

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