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Comic Kanto General Gijinka Pocket Space [a FireRed gijinka comic]

WildfireWhim

Conqueror of the Cerulean Gym
Artist
Pokédex No.
629
Caught
Aug 4, 2019
Messages
12


Pocket Space
Just some kids on a summertime adventure that may or may not go terribly wrong
Started: 10/01/2016 | Last updated: 07/01/2020


DEVIANTART | TUMBLR | KOFI


- If a pokemon faints it is permaboxed
- Only one chance at a catch per route
- Nickname every pokemon
- Legendary pokemon cannot be used
- Run is considered completed after the E4 rematch

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Kadew

*bird sounds*
🌱Featurer
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
38
Caught
Jun 10, 2019
Messages
910
Location
A Dry Place
Nature
Careful
Pronouns
Pokémon Type
Grass, Normal
Pokédex Entry
Doesn't actually like birds all that much.
Oh now here's an interesting gijinka premise. Just a bunch of kids in a virtual reality pocket dimension for the summer. I like the sort of two worlds aspect of it, how they adventure through video game kanto but talk about school stuff from their other life as they go, recognizing kids from school and such. Really feels grounded to have those little bits in there, I like it a lot. ANd it seems like a fun group of kids you've put together, too. And I am 110% on board for team rocket tampering with game code and the glitchiness of that shady guy's badge thing, I love that sorta junk.
 

WildfireWhim

Conqueror of the Cerulean Gym
Artist
Pokédex No.
629
Caught
Aug 4, 2019
Messages
12
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gimme a hot second to figure out how the forums work idk what im doing ksdfjgh

Kadew: Thank you!!! I'm really excited to delve deeper into the world and the plot!
 

violentlydefending

a complete fool
Team Omega
Pokédex No.
1056
Caught
Nov 20, 2019
Messages
228
Pronouns
he/she/they
Pokémon Type
Fairy, Ice
oh woah it's red!!

i really love the concept and the artstyle of this comic, i can't wait to see more!
 

Kadew

*bird sounds*
🌱Featurer
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
38
Caught
Jun 10, 2019
Messages
910
Location
A Dry Place
Nature
Careful
Pronouns
Pokémon Type
Grass, Normal
Pokédex Entry
Doesn't actually like birds all that much.
Dang you just wrecked that nugged bridge recruiter rocket. That detail of making sure his bag went into the river too was a great touch. and Awwww I love the meeting with Red, I'm so glad she got to meet her idol and he was actually cool and kind to her! A shame about that abra catch, though, rough luck. I'd cry too.
 

Kadew

*bird sounds*
🌱Featurer
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
38
Caught
Jun 10, 2019
Messages
910
Location
A Dry Place
Nature
Careful
Pronouns
Pokémon Type
Grass, Normal
Pokédex Entry
Doesn't actually like birds all that much.
Woah that's a cool experimental sort of page layout yo have going there! I was a touch confused at first, trying to keep track of the five independent conversation threads, but as they pulled each other in together further down it was really nice for the payoff of all of them grouped together as a team being shown off. Cute update overall, I love seeing families be a part of things in stories!
 

mizar

young, dumb, and full of you know ;)
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
76
Caught
Jun 16, 2019
Messages
244
Location
lost
Nature
Quiet
Pronouns
they/them
Pokémon Type
Dragon
I thought it was cool at the start at the page, and then when they started crossing over into other panels my mind was blown. I love the last panel of everyone together!! its nice to meet everyone's families and get all these little character moments. I read it Cian->Willow->Marcelle->Bobbie->Abrey, not sure what you intended it to be read as but I think it works in pretty much any order since each one's continuity is separate until they join.
 

Kadew

*bird sounds*
🌱Featurer
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
38
Caught
Jun 10, 2019
Messages
910
Location
A Dry Place
Nature
Careful
Pronouns
Pokémon Type
Grass, Normal
Pokédex Entry
Doesn't actually like birds all that much.
Oh nooooooooo! D: A friend gained and a friend lost, now what are they gonna do at the gym? And she was such a good bean ;m;
 

satanicswirlix

Government Assigned Towelie Kinnie
Artist
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
156
Caught
Jun 30, 2019
Messages
185
Location
Hell
Nature
Relaxed
Pronouns
dude/weed/lmao
Pokémon Type
Fairy, Cute
Pokédex Entry
This user's interests change more often than her pantalones. It is unlikely that she'll ever finish making a nuzlocke comic, but she can die trying!
Haha nooooooo Abrey don't die you were too pure for this world 😭
 

Winterspheonix

Comic Secret Hoarder
Artist
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
116
Caught
Jun 20, 2019
Messages
67
Pokémon Type
Flying, Ice
DAAAAAAAAAAAAAANG I LOVE THIS PAGE SO MUCH! Its very sad and also a bit mysterious, like what in the world is happening here.?? ALso worried about the Red admin thing, idk i got a sneaking suspicion.
 

Krisantyne

oh no
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
655
Caught
Aug 10, 2019
Messages
139
Location
A Jar of Olives
Nature
Calm
Pronouns
she
Pokémon Type
Water
Pokédex Entry
This Pokémon clings to Sharpedo and shares in its prosperity. When its Sharpedo is attacked, Krisantyne will fight alongside it!
hhhh
"Recover the lost data and players" sent chills down my spine. The technical team seems to be pretty confident that they can fix this, otherwise this would be the moment to cancel the game and get everyone out! So there totally is hope that she isn't dead-dead, right? ;v; Haha....
 

Kadew

*bird sounds*
🌱Featurer
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
38
Caught
Jun 10, 2019
Messages
910
Location
A Dry Place
Nature
Careful
Pronouns
Pokémon Type
Grass, Normal
Pokédex Entry
Doesn't actually like birds all that much.
Lost data and players, this data corruption on the screen, it's all so intense and scary and I'm deeply intrigued by where this will lead :eyezoom:
 

Winterspheonix

Comic Secret Hoarder
Artist
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
116
Caught
Jun 20, 2019
Messages
67
Pokémon Type
Flying, Ice
Very very cute lil calm down after what happened lately! (And I love the panel with the kiddos sleeping)
 

Bug

👉😎👉
Administrator
Moderator
Artist
Writer
Screenshotter
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
1
Caught
May 13, 2019
Messages
987
Location
in a pile of bugs
Nature
Rash
Pronouns
he/him
Pokémon Type
Bug, Cute
Pokédex Entry
oh fuck oh shit my dots...............................................................................................................................
So like, does this mean mew/mewtwo is a fully artificial being? Atleast, that’s just my theory at the moment. 🤔
 

oliviamakesanart

yee to the haw
Artist
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
1350
Caught
Jan 19, 2020
Messages
128
Location
Postwick, Galar
Nature
Careful
Pronouns
she/her
Pokémon Type
Fire, Dragon
Pokédex Entry
Obsessed with cowboy hats
Really nice pacing on this page, it's nice to let the characters breath and have a quiet moment after the events of the last few pages. The last panel is so cute, I'm always a sucker for "group falls asleep on each other" scenes
 

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