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Comic Sinnoh Maya's Platinum Nuzlocke (comic)

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kirschsalz

Guest
ya colour pallet is amazing, love em so bright, so beautiful *v*
 

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Conqueror of the Celadon Gym
Pokédex No.
1935
Caught
Apr 30, 2020
Messages
37
Nature
Timid
Pronouns
she/her they them
Pokémon Type
Electric, Fire
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #22
thank you :D !
 
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random-ftw

Guest
Aaah, team dynamics! they're so cute ;w; PUN-LOVING MAGIKARP YES

Your coloring is still gorgeous omg

HELLO THERE MYSTERY PERSON
 
C

Chocolatta

Guest
The Chocolatta is a strange creature, stalking those with nuzlockes that strike her curiousity.

Stalking~
 
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Noossab Blue

Guest
Just read the whole thing and it's very nice! Your team is pretty diverse... About a good as it could be for this point in the game. And I love Kelly! She's adorable carrying Greg around in her mouth lol.
 
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Diaper McDiaper

Guest
Oh. OH. I don't think I ever saw such a good comic on this Forum! -Actually, that's a lie, preety much everyone here has an overwhelming talent, but your characters have something different to my sight, they all look funny and really dynamic! So, I'll just be, here, y'know, stalking `U`
 

Random-ftw

Conqueror of the Celadon Gym
Pokédex No.
1935
Caught
Apr 30, 2020
Messages
37
Nature
Timid
Pronouns
she/her they them
Pokémon Type
Electric, Fire
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #27
thank you guys so much !
im really glad you are enjoying it !
 
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Xanthus

Guest
I'm really digging this run. I like how you are able to do the whole "wait, you can actually understand Pokemon" plot point without making her the ONLY one in the world who can. Adds an interesting flare.
 

Random-ftw

Conqueror of the Celadon Gym
Pokédex No.
1935
Caught
Apr 30, 2020
Messages
37
Nature
Timid
Pronouns
she/her they them
Pokémon Type
Electric, Fire
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #29
im really glad you think so :D
 

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Conqueror of the Celadon Gym
Pokédex No.
1935
Caught
Apr 30, 2020
Messages
37
Nature
Timid
Pronouns
she/her they them
Pokémon Type
Electric, Fire
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #30
pg 18

pg 18 is up :D

Im being really productive these days and its kinda weird for me cx
Holidays are fun

anyway plot happens!! kinda???
and i made the text a bit smaller cause it annoyed me before .
that is all cx
 
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zeFluffleTruffle

Guest
I loved all of the blushing that was going on in the first few panels. And well, Maya's "Glad to have you on board," then prompt boxing of Flappy made me laugh a little. Your art's getting better and better even though it was already gorgeous. The backgrounds, the colors, and the lighting were all so beautiful on this page. And I really enjoyed the development of the plot. Plus that Glameow was really cute.
 
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Xanthus

Guest
Oooh, the plot thickens. I can't wait to see where you're going with this; I mean Cheryl having relevance after that little forest scene? I can honestly say I haven't seen that often if at all.
 
D

DragonDirigible

Guest
Love the colors, love the art, love the character interactions.
Kelly's super cute, too.
I love all of it, really.
Count me on board for this nuzlocke!
 

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Conqueror of the Celadon Gym
Pokédex No.
1935
Caught
Apr 30, 2020
Messages
37
Nature
Timid
Pronouns
she/her they them
Pokémon Type
Electric, Fire
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #34
im really glad you guys like it :D
 
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Oniwanbashu

Guest
That little hook of a plot on the most recent page got me hooked like GURRRLLL WHAT YOU UP TO.

I really love your colors and there's something charming about the way your people are drawn. There's a sort of rough beauty to it if that makes any sense :'D
The scene where Zeta wallops a Wurmple aside is also well-panelled.

On the subject of Pokemon though, here's where the quality fluctuates a little.
There's stylized little guys like the Budew who's completely adorable and I love the semi-realism done on the Glameow but there's the Magikarp who's flatfaced and almost uncanny-valleyish due to the overly-human features on a fish and Zeta who's sort of trying to be both and it's a bit jarring because most of this bird looks pretty semi-realistic but then the stiff, cartoony beak doesn't look like it should work or fit with the design.
Your humans are wonderful the way they are but judging from the pokemon and their poses, I think that's where you'd require more anatomical studies.

I am definitely keeping my eye on this though! That twist has me intrigue on what's going to happen next!
 

Random-ftw

Conqueror of the Celadon Gym
Pokédex No.
1935
Caught
Apr 30, 2020
Messages
37
Nature
Timid
Pronouns
she/her they them
Pokémon Type
Electric, Fire
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #36
Pg 19

and the comic is back :D
i really didnt know if i should put this as an extra cause its so small or like an actual page cause it introduces a new character
honestly this page is mostly to try new styles and improve how the anatomy works in some of my pokemon (thanks so much for the advise oniwanbashu )
and to say that the comic isnt dead cause its been a while since the last update and thats schools fault ... * cough*and all the videogames i have *cough*
 
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Oniwanbashu

Guest
Monferno's expressions here are perfect and I love your redesign for Greg!
It's a minor page, but there's a whole lot of improvement and I can't wait for the gym challenge.
Knock it out of the ballpark Maya!
 
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DragonDirigible

Guest
Yayyy, you're back!
Can't wait to see what will happen with the gym. It seems like you have the clear advantage, but really, who knows what will happen?
Also, new greg is super cool.
 
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Degree

Guest
This is lovely! The art is getting better and better too.

Love all the characters and the Christmas special was mint.

I'm concerned since there have been no deaths yet and this is a platlocke... Hopefully nothing goes wrong.
 

Random-ftw

Conqueror of the Celadon Gym
Pokédex No.
1935
Caught
Apr 30, 2020
Messages
37
Nature
Timid
Pronouns
she/her they them
Pokémon Type
Electric, Fire
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #40

pg 20

after years of no updates it is here
and in kinda good qualityyy
im proud of this lol
ill try to work on them more now but it may be hard cause school and stuff
also cause ow and my bf is taking most of my free time cx

also there is small cameo of my friend you can check her nuzlocke here https://justmiri.deviantart.com/art/Thi ... -453859506
 

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