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Comic Kalos Teen Gijinka fault line // x version gijinka wonderlocke

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5/14/20 - pages #45-#46

Kadew

*bird sounds*
🌱Featurer
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
38
Caught
Jun 10, 2019
Messages
837
Location
A Dry Place
Nature
Careful
Pronouns
Pokémon Type
Grass, Normal
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Doesn't actually like birds all that much.
Fight! Fight! Don't feel embarassed about giant awesome mouth horns! Fight!
 

songwithnosoul

Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Pokédex No.
657
Caught
Aug 11, 2019
Messages
103
Location
A lovely winter dream
Nature
Gentle
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they/them/their
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Water, Ghost
Oliver's design is great! The paws were really unexpected, at least to me, just because hands aren't a feature that I've seen commonly gijinka-fied to such a degree, but the moment of surprise made the moment better because it matched Fault's surprise that hybrids can just walk around in Kalos without having to hide themselves. It's a cool design choice. And the toe beans are cute. I also like his hat!
 

cryptogeists

the fault in our lines
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
281
Caught
Jul 1, 2019
Messages
16
Location
Cybertron
Nature
Bashful
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they/them
Pokémon Type
Ghost, Poison
Pokédex Entry
somebody wrote "tender" in the novel's margins, as if to remind about a precious force
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #24


#25 // #26 // #27 // #28

@mizar lkdsgfk understandable, i feel like wonderlockes arent nearly as common as randomized runs lmao

@violentlydefending @Kadew faults got some self image issues, its ok tho 😔 😔 😔

@songwithnosoul wow thank you!! im really glad it had that kind of effect! deciding which traits to inherit from the pokemon theyre inspired by is the best part of designing gjinkas tbh, its really fun to figure out how to make certain changes work and look good at the same time
 

pinkshellos

oh man oh beans oh m
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Team Delta
Pokédex No.
1220
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Dec 23, 2019
Messages
188
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Hoenn Route 120
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Calm
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she/her
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Bug, Flying
Pokédex Entry
A timid Pokémon typically found in groups. The only thing that motivates her more than companionship is food.
That last panel of #28 is gorgeous! I love Fault’s design. So much.
 

songwithnosoul

Conqueror of the Cinnabar Gym
Pokédex No.
657
Caught
Aug 11, 2019
Messages
103
Location
A lovely winter dream
Nature
Gentle
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they/them/their
Pokémon Type
Water, Ghost
Great fight scene! I love the pervading awkwardness on Fault's side, Era's visible confusion when she faceplants straight into Fault without so much as budging her (because she's a steel-type), the way that Fault just sorta swats her away with Fairy Wind (which catches her wings), how poor Mitzi is just crying while she defends herself. The names of the attacks being used like sound effects is a great detail. And those last panels, where Fault takes off the bandages on her mouth thing to bite through Oliver's Overgrow-boosted Vine Whip, is a great moment. And that panel where Oliver crashes into Fault - ooh la la~ Maybe there's something going on there... (Spoilered because I basically just summarized the whole fight scene, hah.)
 

NyanCheetos

self-proclaimed queen of the sea slugs
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Screenshotter
Team Delta
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518
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Jul 16, 2019
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147
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wizard island, baby
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Grass, Water
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if the cheddar ain't sharp, i don't want it.
oh hey you're back! I remember when you first posted this comic way back when and remember how excited I was for it :) Now I'm even more excited to keep reading it as you work on it. Also I love the whole hybrid idea for gijinkas! such a cool take on it :)
 

Dschubba

Has forgotten she's a diurnal creature.
Artist
Team Alpha
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Nov 13, 2019
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85
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Ooh that last panel on page 28 is a beaut. You know a Mawile's getting real when the fanged head comes out.
 

violentlydefending

a complete fool
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this fight scene was such a fun mix of action and humour i LOVED it
and that last panel on page 28 fault you LEGEND
 

DistortionLocke

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623
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Aug 3, 2019
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16
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U.S.
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Just binged all 28 pages, and it looks awesome!
 

Kadew

*bird sounds*
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I gotta say I always love it when a comic really shows off the bumbling babyhood of early game rival battles. They're trying their best and just falling over one another in awkward meet cute ways and it's a great time to read.
 

Xita

Moo
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Team Omega
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186
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82
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Germany
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Mitzi is just so cute ahhhh I love her design~


And I love how useful Fault’s other mouth is, you’re doing some super creative stuff here.
 

cryptogeists

the fault in our lines
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
281
Caught
Jul 1, 2019
Messages
16
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Cybertron
Nature
Bashful
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they/them
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Ghost, Poison
Pokédex Entry
somebody wrote "tender" in the novel's margins, as if to remind about a precious force
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  • #33


#29 // #30 // #31 // #32

and with that, we are officially caught up to fault lines original run! to celebrate, ive uploaded all the original pages into this handy stash folder! enjoy!

(also, im not sure if i forgot to mention it or not, but ive actually put stuff in the extras tab on the op lmao. its got references and a few playlists in it now!)

@pinkshellos thank you so much! she was really fun to design :)

@songwithnosoul WOWZA thank u for such thoughtful commentary!!! im so glad the little nuances im putting in are actually coming across haha :''')

@NyanCheetos thank you!! it was really fun to go back and revisit the earlier pages!

@Dschubba time to get down to Business haha

@violentlydefending thanks!! fight scenes are really really fun to stage, im glad it turned out good lskdjf

@DistortionLocke yayyy welcome to the run! thank you!

@Kadew me too!! its great to explore how two strangers who just met battle together vs opponents who are so caught off guard by their random flailing lkjsdf

@Xita thanks! for as inconvenient it is all the time, theres gotta be Some utility to having a giant mouth on your head lmao
 

Kadew

*bird sounds*
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Huh, it'd been so long since I read the old version, thank you for sharing! It's super neat to see what stayed and what changed between then and now, like that entire prologue that you completely scrapped. The old comic was still good overall, but I can definitely see improvement in both art and storytelling prowess. I'm sure it's got to be extra fun for you to have reached this point, now able to work on completely new content. I know I'm looking forward to it, at the least!
 

songwithnosoul

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103
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Nice final blow from Mitzi! I like the "Victory!" and Mitzi's confused reaction to having made it through the fight alive. I'm glad that Oliver complemented Fault's horn-mouth-thing, since it seems to be a source of shame for her. It's endearing how seriously Era takes battling and having lost. I wonder what Oliver meant that it wasn't a "fair" fight... Was he just trying to make Era feel better, or was there really more to the fight than meets the eye? Probably the former, but you never know...
 

violentlydefending

a complete fool
Team Omega
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1056
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227
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he/she/they
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Fairy, Ice
oh hell yeah, victory time!! interesting to see oliver not really being all that humble...? (eyes emoji) or maybe i'm wildly misinterpreting that interaction skdljfkd
anyway i love mitzi so much she's so good
 

holdinglines

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i reread and it's cool seeing Oliver when his overgrow ability kicked in, since his flavor text says "hates to lose" and we get to see it

it makes the characters really dynamic, i like it!
 

satanicswirlix

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156
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185
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This user's interests change more often than her pantalones. It is unlikely that she'll ever finish making a nuzlocke comic, but she can die trying!
Oh Era, the first stage of grief is denial. ;)

Huh, for someone who hates to lose, Oliver sure is taking this pretty well!
 

cryptogeists

the fault in our lines
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Team Delta
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16
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somebody wrote "tender" in the novel's margins, as if to remind about a precious force
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #39


#33 // #34 // #35 // #36

@Kadew thank you!! i really like seeing all the progress ive made since then, it makes me feel a lot less stagnant haha. im very very excited to be getting into the newer parts of the comic!! its fun to finally be showing everyone stuff that i havent posted before (:

@songwithnosoul oliver is a very complicated man...... who knows why he does any of the things he does

@violentlydefending @holdinglines oliver likes to think hes a humble guy, but he definitely does not take failure well lkjsdf thank you!

@satanicswirlix cant lose if you convince yourself it didnt count 😏
 

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