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Comic Unova Mature Mon Between Truth and Ideals || A Pokemon W/W2 Duolocke

Thread Description
Updates Alternating Saturdays!

Polymori

A Hot Mess
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
122
Caught
Jun 21, 2019
Messages
181
Location
Johto
Nature
Quirky
Pronouns
He/Him
Pokémon Type
Electric, Poison
Pokédex Entry
This pokemon has an over-active imagination and creates more stories than any sane person should.


It has been a few years since Desean aka 'Dash' has seen his three best friends: Astrid, Bianca, and Cheren.
When Astrid finally turns fourteen, old enough to start her League Challenge, the four of them head out on
an adventure they thought would be all fun and games. But N and Team Plasma have their own agendas.

Uploaded at:
Comic Fury
Forums [You Are Here]
Start Date: January 3, 2020
Last Updated: August 1, 2020
Content Warnings: Canon Typical Violence, Blood, Death



1) A fainted pokemon is a dead pokemon. Permabox it.
2) Catch only the first encounter per route.
a. Shiny Clause
b. Dupes Clause
3) After catching a pokemon, roll a dice.
a. Evens you keep the pokemon.
b. Odds you release it.
4)Every time you get a successful catch, roll a d6 for the point pool:
a. 1 =-1 Point
b. 2= +0 Point
c. 3=+1 Point
d. 4=+2 Points
e. 5= +3 Points
f. 6=+4 Points
Pokemon must use 2 points to be able to evolve.
If you do not catch a pokemon between gyms, the next pokemon is a freebie.
5. You can only use the same number of items and pokemon as the gym leader.
6. Set battle style.

Chapter 2
Pages: 01 02 03 04 05 06 07 08 09 10​

TBA
TBA



 
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Kadew

*bird sounds*
🌱Featurer
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
38
Caught
Jun 10, 2019
Messages
990
Location
A Dry Place
Nature
Careful
Pronouns
Pokémon Type
Grass, Normal
Pokédex Entry
Doesn't actually like birds all that much.
Two full color comics you absolute comic making machineperson. I'm stoked, your cover art looks stellar.
 

Polymori

A Hot Mess
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
122
Caught
Jun 21, 2019
Messages
181
Location
Johto
Nature
Quirky
Pronouns
He/Him
Pokémon Type
Electric, Poison
Pokédex Entry
This pokemon has an over-active imagination and creates more stories than any sane person should.
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #3
Two full color comics you absolute comic making machineperson. I'm stoked, your cover art looks stellar.
You're not wrong! Though the work is split between me and Lyra on this one, thank mew!

ALRIGHT EVERYONE!
After forever and a day, BTAI is finally up and running!
Keep in mind this is a duolocke between @pkmnMasterWheeler and I and we split the work on this comic!
She does the sketches (Except in CH1 I did some of em) and Coloring
I do the Lines, Dialogue, and Backgrounds!




Cameos include @Kadew's Kurukkoo and @MouseWithADinosaurTail's Finding Your Roots!
AS well as @pkmnMasterWheeler's Golden Sun!​
 
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Yuriakashu

Conqueror of the Fuchsia Gym
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
67
Caught
Jun 15, 2019
Messages
60
Location
Route 216, Sinnoh
Nature
Careful
Pronouns
She/ They
Pokémon Type
Fire, Psychic
Pokédex Entry
It consumes graphite and word processors. If it is standing still, something is wrong.
Duolockes have always been interesting to me, and I love how this is also collaboratively drawn!! Backgrounds are really detailed, especially with the posters; colors are vibrant; characters are super expressive-- y'all are off to a fantastic start!!
 

violentlydefending

a complete fool
Team Omega
Pokédex No.
1056
Caught
Nov 20, 2019
Messages
232
Pronouns
he/she/they
Pokémon Type
Fairy, Ice
already love this start!! a feisty little oshawott, cute comic poster cameos... it's all PERFECT
and the art is amazing!! very pleasing on the eyes and just very nice, i'm looking forward to more!!
 

Trollkitten

Kitten of Lore
Artist
Writer
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
208
Caught
Jun 30, 2019
Messages
1,040
Location
Gatto Region
Nature
Quirky
Pronouns
She/her, Aetherai Lorekeeper
Pokémon Type
Fairy, Clever
Pokédex Entry
Autistic writer who starts more things than she finishes. Hyper asexual Twitch Plays Pokemon lorewriter. Rather be a happy shill than an angry critic.
Spindle is an adorable bean.
 

Kadew

*bird sounds*
🌱Featurer
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
38
Caught
Jun 10, 2019
Messages
990
Location
A Dry Place
Nature
Careful
Pronouns
Pokémon Type
Grass, Normal
Pokédex Entry
Doesn't actually like birds all that much.
That trainer has great taste in posters ;D

Spindle has a lotta character already, and I like the touch of the starter being in a net ball instead of just a normal pokeball. Can't wait to see what you and Wheeler have cooked up for us.
 

Bowser's Family Vacation

Johto League Champion
Writer
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
301
Caught
Jul 1, 2019
Messages
1,132
Nature
Rash
Pronouns
She/her
Pokémon Type
Dragon, Cool
Pokédex Entry
"Am I Mario's babysitter? Are you going to call me every time that guy blows his nose, or what?"
But your trainer even got you a Net Ball, Spindle..!

*peers at background* Hey.... Those look familiar....

I'm interested to see how the dice treats you with encounters and evolutions, especially since Unova is a difficult region to begin with.
 

Polymori

A Hot Mess
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
122
Caught
Jun 21, 2019
Messages
181
Location
Johto
Nature
Quirky
Pronouns
He/Him
Pokémon Type
Electric, Poison
Pokédex Entry
This pokemon has an over-active imagination and creates more stories than any sane person should.
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #10
Two full color comics you absolute comic making machineperson. I'm stoked, your cover art looks stellar.
Thanks! just a reminder that this comic is evenly split with work from @pkmnMasterWheeler and myself!
Two people working on one comic is a lot easier!

Always glad to see more Unova runs, I'm looking forward to more pages!
Thanks! Unova is a good region, just I felt it could be a tad better, thus this locke was born!

already love this start!! a feisty little oshawott, cute comic poster cameos... it's all PERFECT
and the art is amazing!! very pleasing on the eyes and just very nice, i'm looking forward to more!!
Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it so far! It's def a wild ride!
And glad you like Lyra's and my work on the art!

Spindle is an adorable bean.
She really is uwu

That trainer has great taste in posters ;D

Spindle has a lotta character already, and I like the touch of the starter being in a net ball instead of just a normal pokeball. Can't wait to see what you and Wheeler have cooked up for us.
Thanks, Kadew! And he sure does! Since it probably wont be super touched up on, Spindle's in a net ball because she's the daughter of Dash's mother's Samurott!

But your trainer even got you a Net Ball, Spindle..!

*peers at background* Hey.... Those look familiar....

I'm interested to see how the dice treats you with encounters and evolutions, especially since Unova is a difficult region to begin with.
God it def was a problem, the dice that is, but more so for one of us than the other Sorry Lyra!


The formatting of the last reply is kinda... wonky. Sorry about that, IDK why it's doing it, but I can't get it to stop.

Wow, what a weirdo you are Dash. Saying what you're typing out loud.
What a nerd.

 
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Kadew

*bird sounds*
🌱Featurer
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
38
Caught
Jun 10, 2019
Messages
990
Location
A Dry Place
Nature
Careful
Pronouns
Pokémon Type
Grass, Normal
Pokédex Entry
Doesn't actually like birds all that much.
Huh, using text-to-speech and speech-to-text? Neat. I like that Spindle takes it upon herself to hit the sendy button.
 

Bowser's Family Vacation

Johto League Champion
Writer
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
301
Caught
Jul 1, 2019
Messages
1,132
Nature
Rash
Pronouns
She/her
Pokémon Type
Dragon, Cool
Pokédex Entry
"Am I Mario's babysitter? Are you going to call me every time that guy blows his nose, or what?"
Spindle: "Come on already!" *send*
 

pkmnMasterWheeler

Conqueror of the Mahogany Gym
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
79
Caught
Jun 16, 2019
Messages
437
Nature
Sassy
Pronouns
She/Her
Pokémon Type
Fire, Cute
Huh, using text-to-speech and speech-to-text? Neat. I like that Spindle takes it upon herself to hit the sendy button.
I think it's just the text being visualized in speech bubbles and him speaking what he types aloud for reader convenience. And of course! Can't trust this dork with something important like that!~ ;3c
Spindle: "Come on already!" *send*
Take too long and Spindle takes away your send button privelages U:
 

Polymori

A Hot Mess
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
122
Caught
Jun 21, 2019
Messages
181
Location
Johto
Nature
Quirky
Pronouns
He/Him
Pokémon Type
Electric, Poison
Pokédex Entry
This pokemon has an over-active imagination and creates more stories than any sane person should.
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #14
Huh, using text-to-speech and speech-to-text? Neat. I like that Spindle takes it upon herself to hit the sendy button.
Lyra is correct! The dialogue from not-Dashes are just there for reader convenience. Thouggh what Dash says is said aloud. He ready everything aloud usually. And Spindle just tired of Dash's lollygagging!
Spindle: "Come on already!" *send*
This is very accurate xD Just wants to get one with it alreadyyyy!

Page 3!
Impatience abounds!

 

Bowser's Family Vacation

Johto League Champion
Writer
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
301
Caught
Jul 1, 2019
Messages
1,132
Nature
Rash
Pronouns
She/her
Pokémon Type
Dragon, Cool
Pokédex Entry
"Am I Mario's babysitter? Are you going to call me every time that guy blows his nose, or what?"
Another accident?

Also, conflict with parental figure spotted. :o
 

Polymori

A Hot Mess
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
122
Caught
Jun 21, 2019
Messages
181
Location
Johto
Nature
Quirky
Pronouns
He/Him
Pokémon Type
Electric, Poison
Pokédex Entry
This pokemon has an over-active imagination and creates more stories than any sane person should.
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #16
Another accident?

Also, conflict with parental figure spotted. :o
Dash is a very reckless boy! What can I say? uwu

Who are these losers?
Oh. Guess their names are Bianca, Cheren, and Astrid.

 

Bowser's Family Vacation

Johto League Champion
Writer
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
301
Caught
Jul 1, 2019
Messages
1,132
Nature
Rash
Pronouns
She/her
Pokémon Type
Dragon, Cool
Pokédex Entry
"Am I Mario's babysitter? Are you going to call me every time that guy blows his nose, or what?"
Furret stole my comment idea, so I'll say the other thing that was foremost in my mind: I really like Bianca's skirt. :)
 

pkmnMasterWheeler

Conqueror of the Mahogany Gym
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
79
Caught
Jun 16, 2019
Messages
437
Nature
Sassy
Pronouns
She/Her
Pokémon Type
Fire, Cute

Polymori

A Hot Mess
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
122
Caught
Jun 21, 2019
Messages
181
Location
Johto
Nature
Quirky
Pronouns
He/Him
Pokémon Type
Electric, Poison
Pokédex Entry
This pokemon has an over-active imagination and creates more stories than any sane person should.
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #20
Looks Like Lyra got the comments knocked out, and better than I would have!
So how about an early page from me? ;3
I'll be out of town tomorrow, so won't be able to post. So yall get it today instead~

 

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