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  1. Epsilon

    Written Story Galar Teen The Thorn: A Shield Storylocke

    Hello. Welcome to something I said I wouldn't do, but seem to be doing anyway. The premise of this run is simple enough: each pokemon type in Galar has a 'club' built around it not unlike a real sports team. These clubs have names, supporters and long histories. There is one club, however, that...
  2. antingaround

    Comic Alola Teen Mon it's always sunny in alola

    welcome everyone! it's antingaround/nicole again, and this time i'm back with something that took slightly more effort to make than that god-forsaken insurgence run 😊 ...that's right, if you checked the tags on this thread, you'll find it's a comic run of ultra sun! now, i can't promise you guys...
  3. Uncle Pine

    And I would play 500 more

    Oh hi fellow nuzlockers, I didn't see you there. Hello, I'm Uncle Pine. You may remember me from nuzlockes such as "Student Exchange" or "De acuerdo con todas las leyes conocidas de aviación". Nowadays I still enjoy playing just as much, but I don't have the time to fully document my runs...
  4. huntaunt

    Written Story Sinnoh Mature Mon Fool's Gold | A Renegade Platinum Storylocke

    “...my soul is the universe’s forge, my mind its flame, my hands their hammer...” Transcript of the Alchemist’s Tenet Equivalence is a universal constant. That is, matter cannot be created nor can it be destroyed, only changed. However, some say that there was one who managed to transcend...
  5. JavierE64

    Written Story Johto Teen Mon The Last of Me: A Crystal Storylocke

    In a world Ravaged by the Legendaries, the one surviving human must traverse his Home Region of Johto in an dangerous adventure. With the help of his only friends, The Pokémon, he must face off against the dangers of the land, who are also Pokémon. Surprise, here´s a brand new Storylocke from...
  6. Sanctell

    Comic Sinnoh Mature Mon Debtlocked

    || Deviantart || How far would you go for freedom? Debtlocked is a comic I jumped into with little preparation as a means of exercising my artistic and writing skills. I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoy making it! ~Pages are planned to be released every 2 weeks~
  7. "Absolutely Certain"

    howdy gamers today we read pokemon fanfiction

    WELCOME TO MY TWISTED MIND Prepare To Blast Off Into CyberSex > put in every single run i remember reading > update descriptions > replace dA links w/forum ones if applicable > do a review. or two. or three > probably add snippets of the runs too i guess this is this it isgoign to be the...
  8. HalfTimeShow

    Written Story Screenshot Mixed Media [MW2] Fraidy Cat

    MIRROR WORLD 2: THE COWARD This is my first real story-driven run, so I'm a little nervous, but I'm excited to learn as I go. Note: may have weird tonal whiplash throughout, I used to be into Homestuck so my sense of humor and tone is permanently skewed.
  9. huntaunt

    Written Story [MW2] The Echo - of a Distant Tide

    “And everything under the sun is in tune But the sun is eclipsed by the moon.” - Pink Floyd, Eclipse Mirror World 2 : The Echo of a Distant Tide Hey all! I’ve decided to throw my hat in the ring for this event, mostly because who can resist making edgy characters just to write fluff about...
  10. antingaround

    Screenshot Fan Game Teen Commentary [FAILED] Insurgence Hard Mode

    Howdy all! antingaround, or Nicole, here. So uh, you may have heard of this fan game called Pokemon Insurgence, which recently got overhauled in version 1.2.5. Some neat features in this fangame include: A new region! With... interesting new characters. and an engaging new plot Fan megas and...
  11. huntaunt

    Written Story Galar Mature Mon The Coming Age - A Pokemon Sword Nuzlocke

    Hello! And welcome all to my first Nuzlocke / Storylocke - The Coming Age. LATE EDIT : Feel free to comment anything, I am admittedly response starved and crave critique ;-; [Critique Level 5]
  12. Exoskellet

    Comic Unova Teen Exo Random Challenge : Vento Peanutt-butter-Oreo

    I felt like doing A randomized nuzlocke and sharing it on discord , but I ended up making one drawing , then 2 , then 3 , and after that I simply decided to make a "comic" , and here we are , isn't life great sometimes ? I'm gonna Update it Every Tuesday , Thuersday and Saturday , so be...
  13. Rhyder

    Screenshot Kanto Commentary Hack Mon Violet Is The Best Color: Rhyder Nitpicks Pokemon Stigma Fire Red! (Introducing the Counting Game!)

    Well, shit. Guess I’m stuck playing this game! Well, fine! If I’m going to do it, I’m doing it my way! Everyone get the Jack and jump in! We’re about to dive into a new, unknown world! ... Also, there will be counting. Lots of counting. :D Alright, onto the main event, folks! In...
  14. Sire HC

    Screenshot Johto Hoenn General Commentary Locke-ception: Featuring Add Rules, Randomizers, and More!

    Welcome to Locke-ception! This run, dare I say it, may end up being the most time-consuming Nuzlocke ever posted on the forums. The premise is simple: with every death in our run, we have to finish a whole additional Nuzlocke before we're allowed to keep going. A more detailed description is in...
  15. anonymouse

    Screenshot Sinnoh Mixed Media Teen [COMPLETE] Shadows Over Sinnoh

    Shadows Over Sinnoh A Lovecraft-inspired run of Platimun Ver. What's up, Nuzforums! It's been a hot minute since I posted any of my nuzlockes, so might as well dive in head-first with my return to the scene. I'm Nelson, aka anonymouse, and welcome to this experimental Lovecraftian-style run...
  16. Kadew

    Comic Kanto General Mon Kurukkoo!

    A Pokemon Red Version Nuzlocke Comic (may contain bird pokemon) [READ ON DEVIANTART] [READ ON SMACKJEEVES] [ALSO HAS A TUMBLR] 2016 Best Dialogue 2017 Funniest Comic 2017 Best Rival🥇2019 Best Supporting Character (Blue)🥇