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  1. NinjaBread

    Written Story Johto Teen Mon A Soul That Shines Silver

    Hello everybody! This is the very first written nuzlocke I've done based on my Soul Silver run that I've done a few years back. I actually had it on ao3 a while back but I decided to rewrite it and that became outdated and I wiped all the old stuff from ao3. Speaking of which, read it on ao3...
  2. Uberle

    Written Story Alola Teen Step Up: A Randomized Moon Nuzlocke

    Hello I am Uberle And welcome to my first go at a fully written run Why yes I am very nervous So ruleset is pretty generic 1. First encounter 2. Nickname everything 3. Faint=Box Now quick notes about the randomization Alola has a weird reaction to being randomized See trainer's Pokemon are...
  3. Tookie

    Written Story Mature [MW2] The Vulpa - Flights of Fancy

    Hi again! It's still Tookie, I'm still on Mirror World, but because I am an absolute font of very good ideas, I'm doing Mirror World 2... 2! With a second character near and dear to my heart to put through the wringer in different dark and horrible ways, no less- have no fear, this won't impact...
  4. boomdidiyadah

    Written Story Alola Teen Gijinka [Sun] Hotshots and Hot Scoops

    Hello, everyone. I came to this forum a few weeks ago, and after reading several of the runs posted here, I have decided to try writing one of my own. I hope you enjoy it. This is a Pokemon Sun Gijinka story set in an Alola somewhat different than the canon one. I don't want to reveal too much...
  5. JavierE64

    Written Story Hoenn Mature Mon Run Away, Survivors: A Trainerless Sapphire Storylocke

    In a World where Humanity no longer exists; A Group of Pokémon will begin their journey across Hoenn, with the hopes of reaching a better life. Good Evening Everybody; After months of intense planning, Here I present to you my Second Storylocke. At first I wasn´t sure to work on this at all...
  6. Tookie

    Written Story Hoenn Mature Gijinka Astra Crystallum- A lightly randomised Emerald Gijinka Story

    Hi everyone! It's that Tookie bloke, the one who mostly does silly screenshot runs, independently trying his hand at something a bit... wordier. A while back, I had the horrible concept for a gijinka RP that also took concepts from Final Fantasy Tactics and FF14. For various reasons, this never...
  7. cyndakip

    Written Story General Where You Belong: A PMD Rescue Team DX Story

    Hi I’m cynda “too many projects” kip and when I heard they were remaking the original PMD games, I couldn't resist writing something for it! Heck, it’s what finally convinced me to get a Switch. Red Rescue Team was actually the very first video game I ever had, so it has a very special place in...
  8. OrdoSkirata

    Written Story Let's Play Teen Diary of a Wynn-ter Soldier

    I'm in a creative flump, so I decided "why not tackle a bit of a challenge and write about it?" So in the vein of Erb's awesome All That We Are, I'm going to diary my way through the world of Wynncraft, an amazing Minecraft RPG in similar vein to things like Runescape and FFXIV. There's even a...
  9. Kinetic Kimo

    Comic Kanto Teen Speechless - A slightly tweaked Fire Red Nuzlocke Challenge

    Hello beautiful peoples! You've found your way to the thread for Speechless, a nuzlocke comic depicting a young trainer's trek through scenic Kanto where no one seems to speak with actual words! Please let me explain. ~~~ ~~~ ~~~ ~~~ Deviantart * Comic Fury Enjoy~
  10. Tsugumi Hazawa

    Written Story Unova Mixed Media Hack Gijinka Pokemon Blaze Black 2 D&D Nuzlocke - Girls Table Gaming Party

    Hello guys, I am supposedly to keep updating normally on my other Nuzlocke run but I feel like I'm confused to write for that at a point, and I only can actually play it like on weekends. SO I wanted to create another Nuzlocke run (variant) because I want to do something that I can constantly...
  11. Erberor

    Written Story Spin-off Teen Other Adventure Open Skies

    The world's a little broken... well, a lot broken, really. But that doesn't mean we can't pick up the pieces and build something better. And we'll do it together. Rated Teen for mild violence
  12. Tsugumi Hazawa

    Written Teen Poke Band Party - The Groupchat Edition (A supplementary fiction to Sacred Gold Idolocke)

    Hiii, It's me "Tsugumi Hazawa" (formerly PRJ0013598604) Also simply known as Ryan Joseph here! So first things first, I wanted to create this as an idea to make up with the anachronical stuff such as Pokegears existing in a supposedly feudal Japan-like world. Instead of having to think of a...
  13. cyndakip

    Written Story Spin-off Teen Mon Sunlight and Shadow: A Colosseum Nuzlocke

    Hello and welcome/welcome back to my Colosseum run! After months of stressing about it, wondering if I should reboot it completely, trying to pretend it didn't exist, and wanting to work on it but not having the energy, I am finally pleased to announce that I will be reposting the pre-existing...
  14. Tsugumi Hazawa

    Written Story Written Log Johto Mixed Media Teen Hack Gijinka Poke Band Party - Pokemon Sacred Gold Idolocke: Shining Conquest of Music - Storylocke

    Hello, Happy New Year! Today I'll be uploading my third attempt at an Idolocke run, this time in Pokemon Sacred Gold. I also have seen it is hard to make your run actually something people are interested though. Anyways, before I start, my inspiration for how different this run from the previous...
  15. RisingMew

    Written Story Galar Teen Mon [SPOILERS] The Wolf You Feed - A Shield Storylocke

    And which wolf will win? ... The one you feed. - • - So I've finally decided to stop lurking and finally post something for a change. I've been hanging around the forums for a while and I even made an account a few months ago trying to encourage myself to post one of my many nuzlocke runs...
  16. SnackyTheSylph

    Comic Johto Teen Bright Souls

    If you’ve read my other runs, you may have noticed my occasional references to “that one Crystal run from a few years ago that I may or may not ever end up posting”. Well, wait no longer; this is that run. I’ve been drawing Pokemon comics since I was a kid, but this is the first time I’ve ever...
  17. R

    Written Story Galar Rhinlocke Beta: The Axiom of Chaos: A Mostly Blind Pokemon Sword Surpriselocke

    [Some fun info to start with: [ ] is OOC text, () is still IC text just asides or what have you This is a SURPRISELOCKE. Usual Nuzlocke rules apply but you surprise trade whatever you catch, with 3 caveats: No duplicates, no pokemon 10+ levels higher than what you already have, and no pokemon...
  18. R

    Written Story Galar Rhinlocke Alpha

    [Just for clarity: [ ] is OOC stuff, ( ) are in character asides. Also a few events have been embellished or flagrantly lied about to make a better story. Also I wonder traded out my starter, just to keep things unpredictable, but wrote like the pokemon I got had been my starter all along.]...
  19. cryptogeists

    Comic Kalos Teen Gijinka fault line // x version gijinka wonderlocke

    Painfully out of place and out of her league, hybrid Fault Ishimoto registers for the first ever region–wide Kalos League Tournament. As she traverses the region and meets her fellow competitors along the way, she begins to realize something much more sinister and dangerous is happening just...
  20. Polymori

    Comic Johto Mature Mon Hypoxia || A Pokemon Soul Silver Nuzlocke

    Uploaded at: Comic Fury Forums [You Are Here] Start Date: November 1, 2019 Last Updated: May 23, 2020 Trigger Warnings: Abuse (Domestic), Mental Illness, Death, Blood/Violence/Amputation, Transphobia Critique lv 3: Please feel free to give me critique following the Lv 3 Guidlines. If you want to...
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